I have come to the conclusion that before I complete this story, I need to give the previous parts some substantial revisions, and there's been a shortage of writing time (sigh).
I do hope to be able to do that sometime soon. (there's not enough time to the day!)
Fascinating. I couldn't stop reading this one - it's unpredictable, with great characterizations and marvelous interactions. It's really really good. You have a nice grasp of phrase and pacing. I especially enjoyed the scenes between Willow and her grandfather and between Willow and Spike. I could *see* each expression. Even your OC's have depth and colour.
I can only give this a 9 even though I think the story is fantastic! Why??? Because this has not been updated in forever!! I love the bit about Willow being Snape's niece, and the relationship between her and Draco. And you even got Spike right! But it truly irritates me when I find a great story, get into it, and come to find out it hasn't been updated in 2 years!!!! Now I know that Life gets in the way, and one's family and personal things are more important than writing. But I would very much appreciate you either sending me an e-mail or posting an author's note or something on your profile stating if you are ever going to continue this. or if you have posted it to another site. Please, Please finish this story and update soonest!
Review By [Silver] • Date [19 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 31 and 32" from Dragonelf
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I hope you will find inspiration to continue this story.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [29 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 31 and 32" from AmarinRose
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And the plot thickens! Dru's kidnapped a Seer, Spike is sort of working with the good guys, and there's a ritual involved. I can't wait to find out what happens next. :)
Review By [AmarinRose] • Date [14 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 31 and 32" from feuerfliege
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Hey, I really, really like this. I hope there'll be an update (preferably soon)! I'm really eager to see the story continued. And I'd love to see more of Spike. I do like Draco, too, though he's a bit tame. Good work!
Review By [feuerfliege] • Date [27 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I'm continuing to enjoy the plot and characterization in your story.Thanks for sharing and continuing the fic.
Review By [RachelK] • Date [12 Dec 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "parts 29 and 30" from Keshkreature
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Oooh, this is awesome! I really hope you will decide to continue with this fic. I like how you didn't stick Willow in Slitherin or Griffendor, and how the Griffendor trio are in the story, but not the main part. It's a nice change. Thanks for writting such great fic!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [7 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 29 and 30" from unicornzvi
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GREAT STORY! Even the unbeta'd parts were great. I really liked the Willow-Draco and Willow-Wesly conversations.
The Unicorn
Review By [unicornzvi] • Date [3 Sep 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I really enjoy this fic. I think the plot is very original. I like the fact that Willow seems to be slowly getting along with and teaching Alacia that all is not as it seems. I look forward to the next installment. Happy Writing!
AmarinRose
