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Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 1 Plans)" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Evil author = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a good story, so please stop being an evil author.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [18 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 1 Plans)" from (Current Donor)IntoOblivion
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I just had to say... I might have before, but then considering the times I've returned to this story to read those words I think it bears repeating... I love what Giles says about love and soul mates in this chapter. It just... perfectly sums up opinions I didnt really realise I had.
Review By [(Current Donor)IntoOblivion] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 2a - The Burrow)" from (Current Donor)IntoOblivion
Review:
I just re-read this, it's one of those marvelous stories which I cannot help but want to return to again and again. I'm pretty sure I've reviewed before, but I just wanted to reiterate how much I love this whole series. I tend to mostly read the buffy/ginny story arc but the whole complex web you've weaved is a fantastic thing, and the mythology/legislation you've added to entwine so many worlds is a fantastic thing to behold. thank you for sharing this with us. I hope at some point you have the time/inclination to complete this.
Comments from author:
Thanks :-).

(I'm actually still working on it. Yesterday even. Unfortunately, the next part of the 'Trip to the Burrow' section is being difficult and right now is over 5K words of unreadable, disorganized mess that's been giving me the evil eye for almost a year. Time to get out an axe and chop it down to size.)
Review By [(Current Donor)IntoOblivion] • Date [31 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 2a - The Burrow)" from fanrei
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i never would have thought a bout a Ginny/Buffy story but i really like where you're going with it.
for the seven of the prophecies : Buffy, willow, dawn, Ginny, Lara croft, Amanda, Luna. and Luna was a real surprise! am i right?
i hope you're still thinking about this story , i would love to read about the hell visit with the in-laws!
Review By [fanrei] • Date [3 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 2a - The Burrow)" from (Current Donor)IntoOblivion
Review:
You cannot understand how happy I was to realise this had been updated since the last time I read it... okay maybe you can considering my rambling overly complimentary reviews so far... but yay! It gave me a big grin. As did alot of this fic, I enjoy the comic moments you manage to put in amongst the plot Dawn's rant on Ginny "I'm not the one she followed home" hehe. Nice how it forced Buffy to accept that her sister was correct in calling Ginny "Her witch"

I really loved Giles' comments on soul mates when he and Dawn were observing Buffy and her witch, they really struck a chord, though I wont try to describe them as you've done that allready far better than I could in Dawns response.

I'm so engrossed in this whole story now, not really sure what to do with myself now that I've pretty much reached the end of what's currently posted. There isn't much I can do except beg, hope, pray that you'll find the inspiration to finish it (in that crazy order which is necessary to keep us unspoilt). I'm hoping (from your review response and the events in this fic) that one of the scoobies will head off to meet Amanda (and hopefully Fann) sometime later in this fic. I'm feeling dense (caus I cant figure them all out) but I really want to see the prophecy come together, all those powerful women in one place =D

Two things, you have Tom refuse to take Faiths dollars despite him letting Buffy pay with them in Girl In A Bar, this might have just been 'cause she sweet talked him, but it seemed a little odd him being quite so grouchy about it here when he was quite amiable in a previous fic.

The only other thing is I think just me being a bit wierd but I found that your use of 'also' in friendly conversation felt a bit off, It just seems a bit more formal to me; to be used in free text or formal conversations, not during chats between friends as close as Ginny and Buffy have become (I probably would have put 'as well' instead). As I said this one might just be my wierd ways, the other week I had to look up a correction a reader had given me (because the way I'd done it sounded right in my head) only to find the word I was using was correct, but considered Archaic... ah well. Or it could just be a minor distinction between American/English that makes that wording seem odd to me.
Review By [(Current Donor)IntoOblivion] • Date [7 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - The Devil" from scottm
Review:
Great series. I am trying to find [9a] Red Raider - The Pilgrimage (Parts 5+) on here. It seems to be missing off the site currently. Am I just confused? I seem to have read this part in the past, but I am no longer finding it when I try to re-read it. Keep up the wonderful writing.
Comments from author:
Sorry for the late-late-extremely late reply. Somehow I missed your question.

I hadn't realized that entry was confusing. You're the first person to point this out.
Story 9a is inside of story 1. I don't recall why I didn't make it a separate story.

See: http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-3280-5/acs+Red+Raider.htm
Review By [scottm] • Date [29 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 2a - The Burrow)" from Dragonelf
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::Gives the plot bunny a carrot omelette::

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"Challenge is a dragon with a gift in its mouth...
Tame the dragon and the gift is yours."
- Noela Evans
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [5 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 2a - The Burrow)" from (Recent Donor)Fritolays
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Love love the story so far! Can't wait to see what happens with Buffy and Ginny's family when they finally get the the burrow. Should be really interesting. Can't wait ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Fritolays] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 2a - The Burrow)" from Javian
Review:
Lovely chapter. This is moving along nicely.
Review By [Javian] • Date [3 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 2a - The Burrow)" from wizathogwarts
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Wonderful update and greatly appreciated.
The 'Relationship' is still building in spite of ms. denial. Hang in there Ginny, she's worth it.
The only thing that could have made me happier would be an update to 'Where the books are'.

Thank you so much
Review By [wizathogwarts] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trumps - The Devil" from JoeDineen
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had to reread to refamilarise me with the story. I like the chapter and I look forward to more.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [31 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 2a - The Burrow)" from andy
Review:
great
can't wait to see how you finally get them together
nice chapter
hope for more soonish
Review By [andy] • Date [31 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 2a - The Burrow)" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Very good!

Now do more more.

In fact, MOREMOREMORE!!!

Thank you.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [31 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 1 Plans)" from SpacedCadet
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The series is great but several threads are hanging and I want to know how they come out.

Please do more!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [26 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 1 Plans)" from spring
Review:
I love this fic so far! PLEASE PLEASE please update/finish this wonderful fic! Please?!? I love this and I really really want to know when Buffy finally admits her feelings! More please!
Review By [spring] • Date [24 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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