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Review of chapter "Nicotine Stain" from MoragMacPherson
Oh, that's just seamless. It feels like that's exactly how it happened. Spooky and wonderful.
Review By [MoragMacPherson] • Date [13 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nicotine Stain" from WhisperToAScream
Always nice to see writers doing their homework. Looks very good, and recognized a majority of the notable names being bandied about. Always felt that Giles and Constantine would get along very well. I can believe a pre-Newcastle John doing something like that, with yet more dead in his wake as result. Any chance for a follow-up story to this with older, wiser, and sadder Giles meeting a likewise older, somewhat wiser, and downright despondent Constantine?
Comments from author:
Pleased that all the research paid off, and there was a hell of a lot involved in this piece. I had the idea for this story for ages and the Ripper Ficathon gave me the impetus to write it, trouble was that the accursed muse buggered off to parts unknown, so this was mostly hard slog. If another Ripper Ficathon comes along, I might do a follow up, but that all depends on the challenge set, so this looks like being a one off.
Review By [WhisperToAScream] • Date [28 Jul 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nicotine Stain" from VillageOrchid
What I liked about this story is that is showed a large group of people hanging out, fairly nicely drawn. Nice playful frienship conversation as well.
What I didn't like was there was no sense of establishing the personality or motivations of any of the unknown characters. You gave us enough to maybe follow the new characters into other chapters, to disintguish themselves just a bit from each other on behavior and dress.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nicotine Stain" from (Past Donor)elementalv
Very nifty twist on Ripper and Ethan in their pre-Eyghon days, and I particularly enjoyed the references to Siouxsie. The cross with Constantine was very smooth and seamless. Thank you!
Review By [(Past Donor)elementalv] • Date [28 Jun 04] • Not Rated
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