Review of chapter "Part Two" from Arekanderu
Nice one :) That should teach people to pay morea ttention to Luna
Review By [Arekanderu
] • Date [1 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Two" from Jonakhensu
I must say that the best part was Luna being right. She should have also mentioned the cure, though.
Review By [Jonakhensu
] • Date [10 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Two" from FicChick
Cute, very cute.
Review By [FicChick
] • Date [1 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Two" from Ansku
:D Good one!
Review By [Ansku
] • Date [1 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Two" from Dragonlove
That was brilliant! I love how Luna ended up being right in the end. Excellent story.
Review By [Dragonlove
] • Date [7 Jul 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Two" from MsBrooklyn
This has everything! Everyone is written completely in character, the canon is adhered to and the plot was just perfect! Bravo!
Review By [MsBrooklyn
] • Date [10 Jul 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "All Black Robes And Brood" from DonSample
Ha! Luna was right!
I felt the end was a little abrupt. I would have liked to see Fred analyse the poison, and come up with the antidote, while Snape breathed down her neck, or something like that. We don't really get to see how her scientific approach solved the problem. It seemed more like Spike or Angel stumbled over the flattened Woogeytramp in the forest, and they figured it out from there.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the feedback. And you're right, it was a bit abrupt, but I found myself at my wit's end with this story. Especially since it was supposed to be a short fic for the Mid Year Ficathon and turned out to be over 10K words. However, I would like to point out that Fred had been suspicious of the "pollen" beforehand and tried to figure things out through working with the blood samples, but she just couldn't do much without a sample of the stuff.
Thank you again for the comments,
Review By [DonSample
] • Date [10 Jul 04] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "All Black Robes And Brood" from FaceInTheCrowd
Aww.. I feel so bad for them. And at the same time.. It's funny. *grins* Can't wait to find out what's wrong with them. There will be more right?
Review By [FaceInTheCrowd
] • Date [9 Jul 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of story "All Black Robes And Brood" from WitchyGrrl
Wow...This is entirely original and incredibly weird.
Naturally, I love it. :) I look forward to more!!
Review By [WitchyGrrl
] • Date [9 Jul 04] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment