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Chrysalis

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Review of chapter "8" from zafaran
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More, more, please. It should be interesting watching how Willow/Severus plays out in the rest of the story. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Any chance of getting any more chapters any time soon? I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [4 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "8" from azulkan
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Glad to see this story is being updated again. Looking forward to more.
Review By [azulkan] • Date [8 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "8" from FiveOfFive
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Great read! I'm really looking forward to more. Now down to business, when can we expect Willow/Snape goodness? Nice choice by the way, I can't wait to see the softer side of Severus : )
Oh, and your Malfoy, gave me chills, wonderful characterization!
Review By [FiveOfFive] • Date [23 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "8" from hekatenovember
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I really like the story so far. Please continue it. I am eager to see where you plan to take it.
Review By [hekatenovember] • Date [18 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "8" from MistofRainbows
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I fail to see why you want to ruin a decent story by making it a Willow/snape affair.. I mean I guess I could see a weird friendship... but do you hate Willow that much? Also of the three cannon people she went out with.. four if you cound Xander they were all good hearted people and nice.. Snape is an ass. Any ways Willow seems too insecure even for her in parts of the story. Besides her magic is stronger than theirs in a lot of ways. Ah well to each their own writing style. I just think that you should work on editing the flow a touch. Still it's not a bad story.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "8" from VillageOrchid
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Pretty good stuff overall thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from VillageOrchid
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I like the implication that Albus knows all about "the slayer's witch" and it appears that this is not well known at all in the wizarding world or by Willow's visitors.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from VillageOrchid
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Interesting... the info dump on all of the questionable people Willow is friends with -- was a bit of a stretch (even though it wasn't all and didn't really cover everything just the highlights), but the stress can explain. Magic is usually Per-formed, I think instead of Pre-formed. Overall liked the chapter thanks for sharing. The other thing is that I think both in the HP books and the Buffy series the "change" is for three nights. The full moon at its highest and the night before and after.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chrysalis" from VillageOrchid
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An interesting concept, and a nice bit of angsty. Thanks for picking this one back up.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "8" from purrfus
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A step backwards for the format, but the spelling and grammar are still much better than the first few chapters.

Some interesting scenes - the Willow stutter was lovely.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from purrfus
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Huge leap forward for the format, spelling, and grammar. Much improved. It really makes a tremendous difference in the story's impact.

The scene with Spike and the ideas / concerns expressed was really good.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from purrfus
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The ranting and babbling are good.

Format, spelling, and grammar issues continue.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from purrfus
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Format you already know, but the spelling and grammar in this chapter are not good. Some of the problems are with JKR words probably not in your basic spell checker, and others should be there, but are probably being missed - ex . beginning is typed as being, and spell check passes it.

The duplication of the phone conversation between Angel and Willow - the first time just showing his portion, and the second showing both sides bogs the story down.

The ideas are good, and Harmony's voice was well done.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chrysalis" from purrfus
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Never saw the original version, so I'll go with what is here.

The story has potential. The format is a bit rough, but since its a re-working of an older story you might need to get some site help to fix it.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "8" from fansick
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I am so glad that this story is continuing and can't wait for the next up date.
Review By [fansick] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Rating [5 out of 10]
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