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Review of chapter "Intel" from purrfus
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Weird. Faith wondering what is going on and why she just joined up. What about the rest of these guys? The go from being on to being awkward and out of character. From the way it is written I am assuming it is deliberate. So if Faith is hearing voices and wondering about her behavior, and the guys are acting like puppets whose puppeteers are taking breaks - who is in charge? And what happens next?
Review By [purrfus] • Date [13 Dec 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Intel" from banner
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I'm intrigued. There's so many unanswered questions - I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
Logan's fascination for Faith is absolutely in keeping with both their characters. I think they might be good friends, given time.
Review By [banner] • Date [3 Aug 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awakening" from Cutiepie
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So, I'm thinking that the only reason Faith got bit is because she was distracted by the voice in her head. And then I am led to wonder who's voice it was. The Big Bad, I know, but is the BB a vamp? I'm glad that you were finally able to update again. I miss my favorites when they aren't updated for a while, and worry that the dread 'real life' might have gotten ahold of my authors. =] Still looking forward to more, especially when the pairing comes into play.

On another note, I really don't understand why Dorian would be part of this particular group. Jack is a touch iffy, but he does have that note of . . . decency? But I've never seen even a hint of that within Dorian. Then again, I didn't bother to see League of Extrordinary Gentlemen either. So, perhaps a hint of why they even put up with the jerk? I'd appreciate it. =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [6 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Challenges and Annoying Telepaths" from Cutiepie
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Oh, bad me. I didn't review the last chapter. Sorry about that. I kind of felt bad for the poor messanger demon. That had to be a nasty way to die. And then the way you ended this chapter? What are you trying to do to me? Cliffhanger! And I just don't have that good of upper body strength. Not a slayer here, ok? =] Anyway, thanks for updating. I am enjoying the story, even though I am feeling somewhat anxious about when we will actually see the pairing show up. =D I'm trying not to wonder too much about the way that everyone can be there together, since you have already promised to explain. Now, I just gotta wait for it. 'Wait for it, wait for it . . . '
Comments from author:
Thanks very much for the praise; the pairing won't show up for another couple of chapters.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [28 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Basic Training" from Windvein
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This is a lot of fun. The wonky formatting is a little annoying, but the story more than makes up for it. I like all the characters and the ribbing you give some of them. I especially like it being told from Faith's point of view and how you slanted her POV with the wish for chatter and so on. Keep up the good work. I'll be checking back.
Review By [Windvein] • Date [9 Aug 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Basic Training" from Cutiepie
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Ah hah! Thank you for identifying everyone. Not so much with the confused now, except to wonder how all of them could be in the same place at the same time and all be in fighting shape too. I mean, as far as I know, Jack and Indiana aren't immortal or anything, so Jack should be long dead and Indiana getting way up there in years. I hope that you will be able to explain that sometime soon. The Charlie thing was priceless. All I can figure is that somehow Charlie and Andrew got together and decided to create the group. Thanks for writing, and I can't wait for more. =]
Comments from author:
Thanks for the lovely review. And, yes, the 'how-Jack-and-Indie-and-everyone-else-for-that-matter' thing /will/ be dealt with in later chapters...if I ever get around to writing the next one!
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [1 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back to Base" from Knight
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can't wait for more,please update as soon as possible
Review By [Knight] • Date [20 Jul 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Back to Base" from Weaver
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Okay, so far I've spotted Jack Sparrow, Clark Kent, Logen, Indiana Jones and Dorian Gray. Am I right so far?
Review By [Weaver] • Date [17 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Order" from Cutiepie
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That last line certainly sounded like Andrew. =] Now, I think I figured out who some of the characters are (Wolverine, Indiana Jones) but there are still some that are a mystery to me. So, if you would please have mercy on me, and write a few more chapters asap? I'd really appreciate it.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [11 Jul 04] • Not Rated
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