More please, I really liked where this was going. Hope to see it updated one day.

Good but unfinished which hurts your score. Come on just one or 2 more short chapters, in the next chapters she tries to kill the Oldfart but he does not quite die, he is still "alive" even if he is in too much pain to even think much less do anything. Then when repeated attempts to kill the snake fail, Willow asks the kids what is happening. Someone tells her about the prophesy and then Harry is called up to give Tom the killing blow or spell.

After that you can have Willow go home or stay for a bit. If she stays then you can have Snape talk to her, I vote he then goes home with her to help the slayers.

Excellent start.

Please since this does not say completed, say you have not abandoned this story?

Oh for the love of god don't stop now!

Ahhh, what a terrible place to leave ... Good premise though. Keep up the good work.
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I was delighted to see that this story had been updated. Love it! Here's to hoping the next chapter won't take so long. Please.

more please..so far i really like it..i just hope willow doesn't get into trouble for using dark magic since she is helping after all..please update again soon.

ooooh sweet. You finally updated this one. he he he. Snape is in serious heat/lust. More please.

This is a wonderful jump start!! I love the concept that Willow was just going about making her breakfast when she gets pulled intot he Wizarding World by an "ancient" spell. Great concept!

I think what I want to say is "holy ac/dc" -- does your Willow still know how to tap into the "white" life magic? The fact that she can feel the emotions around her indicates that even this "black" magic is connected to life energies. The scythe magic and change .. I thought that made Willow more "white-ish," though? Good demonstration, of her reacting dark to dark feelings and emotions. The part that confuses me is that she seemed to come out of the batting cage swinging the black. Thanks for sharing the tale.

I'm liking this story, great job, hope you keep adding more:)

LOVE IT!!!!!!!! O MY GOD! Its Perfect. I can't wait for you to write more. I'm giddy over Willow kicking deatheater ass! lol. sad about hermione*tear* but i love Snapes point of view on Willow and I can't wait to see how they interact. PLEASE write more soon! :)

Is this story lost forever? It has such a promising startand I would love to read more. There are not nearly enough Willow/Snape stories out there. Not to mention that I'm kinda picturing Willow taking out DeathEaters in her pj's with a little bit of bed head. It would be great to see Snape's reaction to her.

I would very much like to read more...I hope you write more soon if you don't have another chapter on hold waiting for reviews..But so far I like how you have everything, making willow the guardian of hogwarts was brillant..Feel free to email me or im me if you want to talk.