Review of chapter "The world shatters" from Christy
I read this a while back and I guess forgot to review it- very sad, but very possible. Nicely done.
Review By [Christy
] • Date [29 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The world shatters" from ayli
I think you've done a wonderful job writting this, and it's very plausable. Richard is an ass, and hates himself way to much for what explaination has been given in the stories.
Review By [ayli
] • Date [27 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The world shatters" from Jaws
I thought it was Edward at first. Then I figured Anita was way too upset. If it had been our Eddie-boy she just woulda got pissed off. What he does don't seem to effect her too awful much. I'm all the for the whole Richard is an asswipe train of thought. Frickin whinebox. grr.
Review By [Jaws
] • Date [5 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The world shatters" from PowerStealerRogue
I never liked Richard. To boyscout. I like it.
Review By [PowerStealerRogue
] • Date [5 Jun 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The world shatters" from Lucinda
Honestly, it's not a way that I'd ever considered Richard.
But the story was well written, and it worked well in the context. The hook (why did he have that vaccination?) worked well, and I could just see the pain that Anita must have been feeling. Ouch.
Review By [Lucinda
] • Date [15 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The world shatters" from IceMaiden
Good. I'd like to see where you would go with this.
Review By [IceMaiden
] • Date [14 Jul 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The world shatters" from CPTSkip
Your story was nicely done. Actually, it seems quite logical as I look back on your story's conclusion. As I started reading, I didn't originally think Richard was the Bad Guy but you actually make a good case. And your other characterizations matched canon quite closely. As I sort of said, your story is disturbing, but nicely done.
Review By [CPTSkip
] • Date [13 Jul 04] • Not Rated