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Review of chapter "The Jersey Two-Step" from fanrei
"Yup. It makes me feel sort of warm and tingly." Dawn told them. "Like one of Faith's sexy smiles." Dawn blushed at the look Buffy gave her.
i like the dawn/faith thing going. it's sweet.

"No magical creature comments from the mystical green ball" great line!
Review By [fanrei] • Date [3 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Jersey Two-Step" from Dragonelf
This story was just as nice as the last time I read it.

"Challenge is a dragon with a gift in its mouth...
Tame the dragon and the gift is yours."
- Noela Evans
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [5 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Jersey Two-Step" from arkeus
ahah, good.

While i can't see the buffyverse and hpverse in the same world, this is really, really nice :-)

Sniff...why isn't this hermione/Willow... Y_y
Review By [arkeus] • Date [3 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Jersey Two-Step" from Vld
I wonder something... in one of my reviews I asked if there had been a problem with Ron, and you answered me than there wasn't, or at least that it wasn't the real problem. So I was wondering about that "you don't chose you family" comment. Could it be that something happened that had Hermione's parents decide to ignore her, or something like that? Maybe something that happened to them and made them resent anything having to do with the Wizarding world?
Comments from author:
If you check out the first part of my unfinished little fic "Perci" - which occurs after the events in the 'Red Raider' series - that should actually explain things (Yes, 'Perci' does contradict something in one of the earlier stories -- the plot for it hadn't even occurred to me when I started writing the series -- but I'll fix that eventually).

Also, I wanted a valid reason within this story for a little bit of Hermione angst. Although everyone often seems a bit cheerful in this series I think they've all gone thru too much for that to be really true.

Hope that helps.
Review By [Vld] • Date [29 Dec 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to Cleveland" from Vld
Wow, I think I just read about ten of your red-raiders stories, so I'm gonna do a general review here. I love it! I hope it really becomes Willow-Lara (just because I can't stand Kennedy). So, when are Buffy and Ginny finally get together? They would be so cute together! And am I right in assuming it's gonna be Faith-Amanda? And you don't have anybody for Dawn... sniff... poor Dawnie!Unless you finally involve her with one of the youngest Slayers, despite the fact that she 'lived with one for ten years'.
Like I said, I loved it.
Oh, and Indy didn't come to the party, that sucks. I love Indy! Even if he is old. And I would bet my neck that Amanda is the other woman Buffy didn't find on that list in 'Girl in a Bar'.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comments.

Hmmm... no plans for Lara/Willow shippage. And the Buffy/Ginny thing is building slowly. Faith+Amanda hadn't even occurred to me. There will be more Faith and more Amanda but probably not in the same fics. And there are plans for Dawn. She won't make it out of this series unattached :-). In fact, I thought I was already giving a clear idea in several fics what'll happen.

Sorry. Amanda was on that list. If it wasn't obvious it should have been clear in the post-Reception meeting Buffy had with Giles later on in the fic.
Review By [Vld] • Date [2 Nov 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Jersey Two-Step" from Hecatonchires
I'm liking this universe. The Ginny/Buffy 'notaromance' is cute ^_^
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [8 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Jersey Two-Step" from perceval
Another great chapter. I've really been enjoying this series. You and oldscout are my two favorite BtVS/HP crossover writers.

Not only do you have the characters down, but you mix the two worlds without using the usual cliches, not to mention how you play off one of my favorite Buffy ships.
Review By [perceval] • Date [6 Aug 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Jersey Two-Step" from SecondSilk
So, is Ginny stepping into Buffy's office and seeing Tonks because Dawn told to her to see Buffy so that Buffy could tell Ginny to tell Dawn about the wands? Or at least, that part of the story?
Poor Hermione, fancing her forgetting to find something out. Very well realised idea. I like the overlapping secrecies between the Council and the Ministry, and having to work around that.
Review By [SecondSilk] • Date [6 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Jersey Two-Step" from CPTSkip
Another delightful chapter in your continuing story. I love the way your Dawn and Buffy interact. The "magical creature" stuff was very funny. They sound like real sisters, and since I have two of them, I know. Lol! I'm looking forward to more zany adventures with the Scoobies and their humorous magical incounters.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [6 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Jersey Two-Step" from raven
While I am enjoying this series, the more time that goes by with the Wizarding world keeping themselves a "secret" the more patently unfair this becomes. The Council agrees to help them in an emergency but their new allies can't even lower themselves enough to tell the people who need to know that they exist? Why bother agreeing to help? Frankly, the fact that the MOM is run entirely by wizards and witches with little to no imput by other magical creatures or bodies and then demands that everyone else dance to their tune is archaic as well as simplistic-they are not the largest nor the strongest magical body in the world. Is there going to be any sort of movement on this or will it continue to be so unbalanced?
Comments from author:
This does take place in the Buffy-verse. When are things there ever fair? The relationship between the Ministry of Magic and the other magical groups in Britain is very complex. And size really isn't a determining factor when it comes to political power.

The MoM doesn't get off scott free in all of this... Arrogance does have a price - if they had all these other magical groups available, why didn't they ever ask them for help against Voldemort?

Of course, a lot of these groups didn't really care what happened in the wizarding world or the rest of the world that didn't involve them. They had their own fish to fry. And, as the saying goes, nature abhores a vacuum.

Will some of these issues be resolved in this series? I really can't say. Sorry.
Review By [raven] • Date [6 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Explanations and Implosions" from Cutiepie
Yay! Thank you for the new chapter! I very much enjoyed reading it. I wish I could write tons and give you helping hints and such, but I am on the brink of a migrane, so I can't think straight enough to even type this without having to go back and fix multiple errors in my spelling. (Not that you will see the errors, since I have fixed them.) Please keep writing in this entertaining universe you've set up for yourself, and I will continue to enjoy each and every update. =]
Comments from author:
Ah... spelling errors... if it weren't for spelling checkers it would take me twice as long to write, just because of the slowness of using a dictionary.

Thanks for the kind comments. For some reason, everything I write seems to end up there. Even when I try to avoid it. So there'll be plenty more.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [5 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Explanations and Implosions" from CPTSkip
I don't believe it! Your story just keeps getting better and better. For one thing, I love how your characters are all recognizable from their source stories, but they have all grown and changed like real people in your future. I also really like the way they talk to each other and how you keep throwing in bits of humor and zingers while they are talking. So Dawn thinks Faith is sexy? Well calm down and join the freaking world Buffy. Who doesn't think Faith is sexy? But I still loved her reaction and also how she reacted to Tonks and Ginny's relationship before she found out what was really going on. All in all, you stories are just way too entertaining. The wait until the next update is just pure agony! Lol! Please keep up the excellent work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comments :-).

I'm trying to keep things ambiguous but in character with Dawn and Faith in this series. But I couldn't resist throwing that in. :-). I already have so many sub-plots floating around as it is that one more might push it over the edge.

Hope you liked the conclusion to this little side story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to Cleveland" from Rhodanthe
Oooh the plot thickens!!!!! Continue!!!
Review By [Rhodanthe] • Date [18 Jul 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to Cleveland" from Cutiepie
Whoo and also Hoo! I like this bit. 'Course, I like your entire AU world epic, so that's no surprise I guess. I think Tonks is adorable, and you write her well. Now I just want to find a fic that pairs up Tonks with Faith. =] Anyway, thanks for more!
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [17 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to Cleveland" from malaskor
Interesting beginning. I'm looking forward to see what you have planned next (please don't forget Xander - it happens all too often in HP crosses...)

Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:

I haven't forgotten Xander exists but this is a very short fic (A whole 2-3 parts) and he's elsewhere at this time. So the chance of him appearing is very slim. (In the Crossover/AU series this is a part of he spends most of his time in LA and this takes place in Cleveland.)
Review By [malaskor] • Date [17 Jul 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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