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Review of chapter "Competition" from CPTSkip
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I love this story and your Super-Dawn! And the way she uses Dawn-logic (TM) is truly wonderful. I have two younger sisters and your Dawn reminds me of both of them and how they thought and acted when they were Dawn's age. Well, except for the being an assasin thing. I think. I look forward to your next story with much anticipation. Thanks for letting us read your wonderful stories.
Comments from author:
Thank you. It's good to hear that things come over naturally.
My next story has just been posted but it isn't in this series. The next one in this series I have planned for August 3. It's a sidestory of sorts...
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [26 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Competition" from Cutiepie
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Still don't know the anime fandom it comes from, but I still also am enjoying the world you are creating here. Thanks so much!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you're still enjoying the stories.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [22 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Target: Ethan Rayne" from CPTSkip
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Excellent update. Your supporting characters, including Ethan, seemed very true to the show. And your Dawn is just getting more and more interesting. I look forward to each of your updates with great anticipation. Please keep writing because I really want to see where your Dawn will go as her personalities merge.
Comments from author:
Thank you. And don't worry, I've got no intention to stop writing anytime soon.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [20 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Grounded" from CPTSkip
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I really like this series of yours, even with the odd combination of comedy and darkness. Your Dawn and her friends are great and actually seem to talk and act like early teen girls. And poor Super-Dawn. I hope she opens up to her mom or Giles or even (shudder) Buffy. I like the fact that Dawn, and her friends, are smart and that Dawn realizes even though she has the skills, she doesn't have the body to perform many of those skills. Maybe since she won't be going to school she will have time to develope her strength and agility. I look forward to more updates to this wonderful and imaginative story of yours.
Comments from author:
Thank you and well, I personally believe that nothing is ever so dark that it's impossible to put some comedy in it as well. Opening up to someone that can actually give advice that isn't based on tv will someday have to happen but as long as she can put that off she does so. After all, that sort of thing will get back to the whole scooby gang and that might be something she has no intention to see happen anytime soon. You'll understand why by the time this story is over. And with Dawn having the time to develop strength and agility, that is the sort of thing that takes a lot of time and then you have to wonder... Does she have that time?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Grounded" from carrytoomuch
Review:
This is an excelllent fic. I'm happy you have continued with it.
Definitely one of my fav. Dawn stories
Comments from author:
Thank you, and I've still got quite a lot of ideas for future stories so don't worry about it ending anytime soon.
The only thing is that I don't post stories until they are finished so it might be some time before they actually appear.
Review By [carrytoomuch] • Date [18 Jul 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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