Well, this little bit was really cute somehow. Love the comment about the pants. Would a male pretender be good at pretending to be female? Are you going to continue this little drabble into a fic? I keep wanting to see how Jarod would deal with a period.
Keep writing! (^_^)/
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [22 Aug 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Wow, you got some good ones here. Only a couple little things, mostly nit-pics really.
First, Calvin handed Oz three things, so Oz couldn't have taken "both".
Next, "Ms Poppins" doesn't belong solely to the House of Mouse. Pamela L. Travers is the one who created the character, and who wrote the eight books upon which the Disney movie was based.
I know there was one other thing, but I can't remember what it was, so . . . whatever. =] We'll just stick with two examples of obsessiveness.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [24 Jul 04] • Not Rated