Review of chapter "Interview and Initiative" from AXanFan
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I keep saying that I am going to quit reading incomplete stories, but there are some really interesting stories that I would miss. I am guessing that you have probably abandoned this since it has been more than 2 years since you updated, but I have hopes that you still monitor your stories and might consider continuing if enough people ask. I am only one person, but I am asking. To be honest this seems little more than a prologue to a coming story, but I find the groundwork you have lain to be very interesting -- Please consider writing more!
Thank You !!!
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [15 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interview and Initiative" from eriktheviking
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This is a great story, I can only hope you decide to continue writing. Well done & thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [16 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interview and Initiative" from sabinbc
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I just found this story and am intrigued. I hope the author comes back to it.
Review By [sabinbc] • Date [12 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interview and Initiative" from cjdunk
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Please Please update this soo. I want more.
Review By [cjdunk] • Date [12 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interview and Initiative" from spring
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This fic is wonderful so far so I must ask why haven't you updated in almost two years? Again I love this fic please please please update.
Review By [spring] • Date [30 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interview and Initiative" from AzrielSunHawk
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oh dear GODS you've got to finish this!! it's GREAT!! so, how much begging do i need to do ? Cheers!
Review By [AzrielSunHawk] • Date [27 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interview and Initiative" from dogbertcarroll
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May have started as Xander centered, but that ended pretty quick. I'd suggest moving this to the Dawn centered category.
Review By [dogbertcarroll] • Date [25 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interview and Initiative" from zafaran
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more, more, please. It's been ages since you've had a chance to post a new chapter. Any chance of your posting a new chapters anytime soon? I very much like the assortment of character's you've put together for this story, and am eagerly looking forward to seeing what happens in the upcoming chapters. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interview and Initiative" from Dawnlady
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I really like the idea behind the story and your writing I do hope you keep on with it ... I loved the interaction between Hammond and Dawn
Review By [Dawnlady] • Date [17 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Magically Dead" from windeetree
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I am really enjoying this story so far and I hope you update it soon.
Review By [windeetree] • Date [13 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interview and Initiative" from wolfshell
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interesting and good story, though you did make one mistake. The General's comment about the UH-1N only being available to the military is false. You can find them, or a similar model Huey, quite easily on the civilian used aircraft market. They are still popular with a large number of people and professions. the last one i looked at was alomst identical to the UH-1N(the difference being nice seats for 8 inside, rather than the military seats for 14) and was selling for about 300 grand.
Review By [wolfshell] • Date [24 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interview and Initiative" from Crydwyn
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This seems very interesting... I'm looking forward to finding out how and what each group discovers about the other. Definitely looking forward to your next update
~Cry
Review By [Crydwyn] • Date [13 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interview and Initiative" from MamaLadyWolf
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Way COOL! I love it. Please I need more to read. Thanks
Review By [MamaLadyWolf] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Not Rated
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