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Review of chapter "Author's Note" from firedrakegirl
Review:
I really liked this fic, and would love a sequel, maybe Willow taking Kurt to visit the Scoobys?
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [27 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doomed" from bigreader
Review:
only problem, willow was floating pencils in senior highschool. no big stuff till year five really.
Review By [bigreader] • Date [20 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Author's Note" from amusewithaview
Review:
I liked this, the end was sort of abrupt but that's completely understandable considering. A Christmas continuation? Cool! I vote Willow buys him some earmuffs for his adorable pointy ears!

Danke
Comments from author:
Ah that would be so cute. Thanks for the review.
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Results" from zill
Review:
more, please?
Review By [zill] • Date [15 Oct 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Results" from Susan
Review:
I like that you kept Willow a witch. I think Willow and Kurt make a cute couple. Here are a couple of suggestions that I hope that you don't mind making. First, it would be good if you added a slayer in there, maybe another slayer was called after Faith got in coma. She could be a girl that doesn't know of her calling nor does the Watchers Council know of her. Maybe she is looking for her birth mother who maybe adopted her out because she was too young to have kids. Storm, who could be 29, would be a good choice for the mother. I always wanted to see that in a story. Please don't make her related to either Scott or Logan since it is too overdone. Willow will know what the girl is when she accidentally shows her abilities but the x-men won't which will led to more questions. Since the father gives the x-gene for mutation the slayer won't be a mutant unless you decide to make her one as well. Her mother being a mutant could give her twice the enhancement on her slaying ability but no other abilities besides that of the slayer (twice as strong, double the reflexes, balance, grace, senses, and healing yet her body is use to it so loud sounds won't cause her migraines). Surprisingly the x-men won't find the x-men gene responsible for mutation but they might find out in her DNA that her mother is a mutant. Secondly, maybe you can throw in Magneto finding out about the hellmouth and getting an evil army to help in his war to be rid of mankind. So both the slayer and the hellmouth suggestion should be a good way to let the x-men find out the truth about Willow, the hellmouth and even the slayer. Maybe this way you can bring in Buffy and the gang if you want them in there. Whatever you decide about the suggestions I hope you will update soon because I love the story and really want to read the rest of it.
Review By [Susan] • Date [14 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Results" from Tynan
Review:
I like the story so far..I think it'd be cool for willow to be a witch/mutant..possibly a shapeshifter like mystique..it could show up in a time of stress.
Review By [Tynan] • Date [23 Aug 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Results" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I enjoyed re-reading the story and the addition... but does that mean you're planning to do some more? Hoping yes.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Jun 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Results" from Dreamweaver
Review:
Hope I'm not too late to put in my 2 cents.....

Definitely no to Willow being a mutant. As witness Xavier's comment in Chapt 3 that no mutant could have all those powers at one time. Also, I like a more natural Willow rather than a DNA modified Willow.

I could see where a witch/mutant Willow could come in this story. And, it would give her one power to use that likely wouldn't be as exhausting as use of magic is for her. But, considering Prof. X and the X-Men's mental barriers/world view regarding magic, that senario would only give them an out to just focusing on her mutant power and ignoring/pretending her supernatural abilties didn't exist. Really wouldn't suggest a witchy/mutant Willow. I would also rather see the X-men's world rocked than Willow's.

Most prefer to see her as pure supernatual-witchy Willow. It would definitely shake the X Mansion people up and intro "a whole new world" to them. Willow would still be able to fight evil using her abilities, and if the X-guys would be willing to accept the new world opened to them, Willow could be let into their Danger Room training sessions too (which would allow her to learn physical fighting and to maybe help increase her stamina when using her magic so she wouldn't be as exhausted as she presently seems to get. The one other reason I REALLY want her to be Witchy Willow is that she'd be more of a help to the X-Men 'cause unlike the rest of them, her DNA would be normal and WAY less likely to be tracked. It would give the X'ers at least one really powerful player that wasn't a mutant.
Review By [Dreamweaver] • Date [27 Jun 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What are you?" from LadyCarpathian
Review:
Ok. Why has this not been continued?????? This is just so Cute!!! I can SOOO see Willow with Kurt!! And she would be the kind to latch onto him first!! This must be continued!!! Please!!!!
Comments from author:
Sorry for the wait and thank you for the review. I'm glad their are still people interested in this fic.
Review By [LadyCarpathian] • Date [30 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What are you?" from cryefourme
Review:
I love this story. I think you should give Willow a latent mutation such as healing like Logan or telepathy, and have the Proffesor flummoxed on how she does the witchcraft. It would be fun to see how the both sides cope with eachother,
Comments from author:
Thanks for the suggestion! I think it would be interesting conversation at least. *Grin* Poor Professor. ~angelaask
Review By [cryefourme] • Date [11 Apr 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What are you?" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Another vote for Willow staying a witch. As you said, it would be worth it just to shake up the professor's reality paradigm and wipe that condescending tone from his little speech to Willow (let's see the results of that blood test they're obviously going to give her and go for Take 2 of that scene down in MedLab). That and it just fits her better. I'm eager to read more. Please continue!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Judging from the responses I think Willow is going to stay a witch. LOL! But I'm not to sure should Willow blood test turn out completely normal or should they find an unknown element in her blood (not the X gene) that may account for Willow's special abilities. One of my readers suggested something called "wiz gene" from RPG world book "GURPS Technomancer". I also read somewhere in other X-men/BtVS crossovers that the Hellmouth had left a imprint on the Scoobies that may explain some of the unknown energy that surrounds them. Hmm... the possibilities.

angelaask
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [10 Feb 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What are you?" from LNR
Review:
Willow is a witchy witch!!! No Doubt about it! Great story, more please.
Comments from author:
*GRIN* LOL! So I'm guess that one vote for Willow being a witch. ;} Thanks for reviewing. ~angelaask
Review By [LNR] • Date [31 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What are you?" from kumagorou
Review:
Willow should stay a witch. So much more fun watching Xavier try and explain it away, even when he's wrong. *evil grin* But I'm sure it'll be fun to read no matter which direction you take with it.
Comments from author:
Ooooh! *snicker* I like that ideal. I could see Xavier desperately clinging to his beliefs while he try to scientifically rationalize the conundrum that is Willow Rosenberg. ~angelaask
Review By [kumagorou] • Date [31 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What are you?" from tremerid
Review:
Sorry for the double review lol.. i read some of the posts out there in this stories review section, and i would have to agree. Witch is what i would vote for, and someone brought up the thing about cerebro that i forgot to list.. so yes, she was literally standin in one of the rooms of the mansion, and it didnt pick her up. Id say thats pretty conclusive. As to someones earlier words on "heaven and earth"....

HORATIO
Propose the oath, my lord.

HAMLET
Never to speak of this that you have seen,
Swear by my sword.

Ghost
[Beneath] Swear.

HAMLET
Hic et ubique? then we'll shift our ground.
Come hither, gentlemen,
And lay your hands again upon my sword:
Never to speak of this that you have heard,
Swear by my sword.

Ghost
[Beneath] Swear.

HAMLET
Well said, old mole! canst work i' the earth so fast?
A worthy pioner! Once more remove, good friends.

HORATIO
O day and night, but this is wondrous strange!

HAMLET
And therefore as a stranger give it welcome.
There are more things in heaven and earth, Horatio,
Than are dreamt of in your philosophy. But come;
Here, as before, never, so help you mercy,
How strange or odd soe'er I bear myself,
As I perchance hereafter shall think meet
To put an antic disposition on,
That you, at such times seeing me, never shall,
With arms encumber'd thus, or this headshake,
Or by pronouncing of some doubtful phrase,
As 'Well, well, we know,' or 'We could, an if we would,'
Or 'If we list to speak,' or 'There be, an if they might,'
Or such ambiguous giving out, to note
That you know aught of me: this not to do,
So grace and mercy at your most need help you, Swear.

Ghost
[Beneath] Swear.

HAMLET
Rest, rest, perturbed spirit!

Hamlet: Act 1-Scene V.

-Tremerid
Comments from author:
I knew that sounded familar! Got of love Shakespear. ~angelaask
Review By [tremerid] • Date [31 Jan 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What are you?" from tremerid
Review:
Great story so far:) Always enjoyed the kurt willow pairing, and i think this story could build up when heck of a head of steam as it goes along. As for willow being a witch or a mutant, i'd say keep her as being a witch. See, her being a mutant wouldnt explain her ability to resour angel, or her later on abilities(later in the series) of being able to go out to a club with amy, and do all the stuff she did.. or the enjoining spell to defeat adam. Theres tones of other stuff out there that shes done too.. like my will be done etc. However, if you wanted to add in the mutant angle a bit, i guess you could use it as some obscure mutation explaining why she gets such an extraordinary high from casting. I mean, none of the other witches, not even amy and her mother seemed to be that addicted to it.. yes, amy was a crank when it came to black magic, but she didnt seem nearly as bad off as willow ended up. At any rate, she would need to be an uber-mutant to explain away all the spiritual and preternatural stuff shes done. So i say, witch she be, and witch she stay lol. Keep up the good work.

-Tremerid
Comments from author:
Thanks for the wonderful and thoughtful review. You do have a point. A mutation wouldn't explain some of the spells that Willow preformed in the past. There are just to many of them. It would be difficult to come up with a single mutant power that would explain how Willow was able exhibit so many abilities. But I can definately see mutation as a way to explain why Willow get high when she use magic or why she is a natural at it. ~angelaask
Review By [tremerid] • Date [31 Jan 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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