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Review of chapter "The Past" from (Past Donor)lucidity
Review:
great story - looking forward to the sequels!
'lucidity
Review By [(Past Donor)lucidity] • Date [20 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Past" from purrfus
Review:
I probably would never have had the chance to read this because I wouldn't have thought to look for it, but fortunately you wrote a sequel and recently updated.

A totally hilarious blast to read.
Comments from author:
glad you enjoyed it. hope you enjoy the rest in the series too. *grin*
Review By [purrfus] • Date [4 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Past" from Elleria
Review:
Lovely story.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [9 Mar 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Past" from Zira
Review:
Me like. V funny. Loadsa love, Zira - off to read sequel now.
Review By [Zira] • Date [14 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Past" from Caliadragon
Review:
Thank you into the insight of why Moneypenny left and became Xander's mom. Like James I am glad that she left and gave us all Xander.

Thanks

Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [5 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Past" from CPTSkip
Review:
I liked your story. I'll admit, I kept seeing the Connery version of 007 in my head, but that was darn nice. You took a silly idea and wrote a good story while keeping most of the characters true to canon (I thought your version of Buffy was a bit too whinny Lol!) and your 007 was very cool. I hope you write more of Xander and 007's adventures.
Comments from author:
Well, I'm trying for a sequel... however, I'm also refreshing my memory on certain episodes, so it'll probably be a month or so before it comes out.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Victory and Twinkies" from Caliadragon
Review:
I loved that, "You of course!" That was brilliant. They may not be meant for a romantic attatchment, but I love the way that they are with each other. Thanks and more soon I hope.

Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [4 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Engagement" from Cutiepie
Review:
Wow, you just keep things rolling right along here! I feel winded, and I've only been reading the action, not participating in it. That is a mark of good writing, you know. Keep up the good work, and I'll be reading. =]
Comments from author:
Actually, I felt the exact same way. I didn't know where the story was going when I wrote chapter 1. It just ran along and dragged me with it. *grin*
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [3 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Engagement" from Caliadragon
Review:
God I love this fic. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Thanks and more soon I hope.

Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [3 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How to frazzle a vampire" from Caliadragon
Review:
Yet another excellent chapter. I love the wit and sarcassam you are using. I have to say I like the idea of Faith being friends with Xander, more than I like how they portrayed her on the show, so I hope that will happen here.

Thanks and more soon I hope.

Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [1 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Preparations" from Caliadragon
Review:
I am really enjoying this fic and look forward to seeing what happens next. I love the way that Q is behaving and I really like the idea of Xander and James working together. Thanks and more soon I hope.

Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [1 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Issues" from Caliadragon
Review:
This is looking to be a very good fic and I am glad to see that you had it that Xander fights fro Willow, not Buffy. Thanks and I look forward to seeing what happens next.

Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [30 Jul 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Issues" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
This is a very interesting crossover and you've got some great foreshadowing going on. I can't wait to see where you take this!
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [30 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Issues" from (Moderator)acs
Review:
Another interesting chapter but you'll want to watch out for depicting a too competent Xander. He's a side-kick, not the normal hero of the piece. A realistic Xander might interfere in Buffy's personal life (jealous of her boyfriends, that kind of thing) but he is very unlikely to act superior when he's in Buffy's professional space (vampire/demon killing)

Even as the "Zepo" he has flaws and that's part of what makes him interesting.

The picnic basket was an interesting/amusing idea that added a Bondian flavor to the story.

Looking forward to where you take this story.
Comments from author:
he's been a background side-kick in most of my stories which I will at some point put in here as soon as my computer finishes being annoying.. This was a challenge to myself. Spike and Buffy are my primary favorites.
Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [30 Jul 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In His Lady's Service" from (Moderator)acs
Review:
Interesting premise and not a bad start.

A little bit of exposition at some point to explain how Moneypenny ends up in Sunnydale with a different name (and how the Moneypenny/Bond pairing happened considering the serious lack of same in the movies) might be helpful in fleshing out the story.
Comments from author:
I've got the past of MoneyPenny written, however it comes at the end of the whole story.
Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [30 Jul 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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