So far it's a good story. I like you're idea and I hope you continue. It's been a few years since you updated, and even though I just read it, I really want to know what happens next.
Okay -- nice job so far. Fictional band, cool. However, if the song-lyrics were from a movie, then someone wrote them and someone sung them and/or wrote the music that goes with it. You should probably look it up and credit it to be fair, dude.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Aug 04] • Not Rated