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Review of chapter "Interlude III" from Silver
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I have had this on my tracking list for some time and I re-read it today in the hopes that it would have ben updated. I adore this fic and like the bit about Faith, Fred/Lyri, & Cordy being friends. also liked how the wand works for Cordy's visions. I cannot give this a 10 as it has been 4 years since this was last updated. I was going to remove this from my tracking list as it seemed it was never going to be updated. I checked your profile page, and you had placed a note saying that this would be updated soon, so I did not remove it. I have to ask when the note was placed? I checked your homepage and there is a note that it "will be returning soon". I only hope that it is very soon, as I am very eager to see more of this!. Please please update soonest! thanks
Review By [Silver] • Date [6 Nov 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude III" from SwimmieTeam
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WOWOWOWOW!! More, please!
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [4 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude III" from TouchoftheWind
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NOOO! Connor can't be hurt! Illyria should kick their arses...

More please!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [4 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude III" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
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very nice now update... still waiting!
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [2 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude III" from Dragonelf
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::Gives the plot bunny some chocolate carrot cookies::

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Batman: What's yellow and writes?
Robin: A ballpoint banana.
Batman: Exactly!
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [19 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude III" from spring
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I love this wonderful fic so far. I have to wonder how the Death Eaters expect to get into any of the rooms that require a password? More soon of this wonderful fic please.
Review By [spring] • Date [4 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part Two" from anouk
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I like the idea but it's a little fast paced. The romance especially. Some of the characters' voices sound off too, especially Bill in his scene of disbelief towards the notion of vampires with a kid and the Slayer. I think his reaction even if disbelieving would have been less insulting and abrupt, more of a disbelieving raise of eyebrows or conflicted emotions on his face while he tries not to blurt something and insult the girl he's attracted too, etc. He simply seems to be rather tactfull and nice in canon.
Review By [anouk] • Date [3 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude II" from NaiveGhost
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Thanks for the update.
Keep writing!
;-)
Review By [NaiveGhost] • Date [14 Jul 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude II" from Alianna
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This is such an brilliant story!
Review By [Alianna] • Date [10 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude II" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
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fabulous love the story, and the fact you've brought Illyria into the mix and made her a maybe not so evil part is very original (I mean if the Senior partners are scared of her can she be all bad) maybe being in human form is having an impact on her hope you get to update soon cause I'm really enjoying this fic *collapses out of breath* (end of semi-willow-type-babble)

*feeds the plot bunnies high carbo-food and a triple espresso*


*Hugs&kisses*
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [10 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude II" from Dragonelf
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Any chance of getting a small scene where Connor's kitten tries to
jump/attack on Minerva when she is in her animagus form?

::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [10 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Connor's First Birthday" from Alyssara
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I just wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying the story! But I do have one question: what happened to Wini, the kitten, that Cordelia had already bought? Of course, I'm a firm believer in multiple cats so maybe Wini and the gray kitten can play together :-)
Comments from author:
don't worry, wini is still around... but as a pet person like you, I believe the more the better!
Review By [Alyssara] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Connor's First Birthday" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Cool chapter.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part Two" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Feeds the plot bunny::
Comments from author:
Thanks. My plot bunny is evil and disappears on me on a regular basis!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [6 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part Two" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm enjoying your AU, future fic cross-over. Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Hopefully I can continue with it a bit more than I had. Thanks for the review.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [6 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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