Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from eriktheviking
Still a worthwhile read.
Review By [eriktheviking
] • Date [27 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from wolframhart
Just found the story and enjoyed reading it. I look forward to seeing where it goes.
Review By [wolframhart
] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from RelapseWarrior
This is amazing, a great look into a Xander whose had his being stripped and remodeled but still made of the same, trustworthy foundation.
Review By [RelapseWarrior
] • Date [4 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Letomo
I'm sorry this seems to be abandoned, as it is one of the few Anita-crosses I actually liked. Thanks for sharing what you did!
Review By [Letomo
] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from nerfherder
A very complex and involving tale... I liked it and regretted its brevity. Please, more?
Review By [nerfherder
] • Date [30 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Cdog
This was an interesting story. In fact it was only the third Anita Blake story I've ever read, which by coincidence are both on this site, another Xander story and a Harry Potter one.
Shame you never finished it, it would have been fun to see whether or not Xander wound up doing something to Jean Claude or Asher.
Review By [Cdog
] • Date [15 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from AXanFan
I have been reading fan fiction for about 10 years -- my how time flies -- but only discovered TtHM about 4 years ago -- I think this story was one of the first ones I read, but only the first few chapters. I had never heard of Anita Blake before then so I kept getting lost with the characters. I have since discovered that I really like the BtVS-Anita Blake x-overs, especially with Xander. I still don't know much about the Anita Blake verse -- not even where it comes from -- I've only ever seen the characters in these x-overs so they are all most likely OOC.
I started reading this because it was Xander-centered, but to be honest Xander is so OOC in this I can barely recognize him. I realize he is different -- older, magically changed and in a different dimension on his own -- that would change anyone's character. I mainly continued to read because it is well written. I have to admit that you lost me on some of the mysticism and all of Xander' theories -- there might be a little too much going on that I won't catch since I don't know about all the "politics" with the different shifter clans, not to mention the different Vampire Clans.
I love the Copter character -- love that he is so loyal to Xander -- love how they connected -- that Xander has at least one true friend among all the people who either want to use him or kill him.
I would really love to read more and hope you continue this very soon.
Review By [AXanFan
] • Date [22 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from jcon
Came across this unfinished story through recommendation on the home page. People still admire and want the story finished. Me too.
Enjoy the Xander story, "he who sees", he who people and other underestimate.
Characters are well written. Plot is enjoyable.
Review By [jcon
] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from ebony
I know it has been a while since you updated but please finish this story.
Review By [ebony
] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Nuala
Stumbled across the story & really enjoyed it. Hope you will want to continue with it someday ...
Review By [Nuala
] • Date [28 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from nemogbr
Adding mine. Enjoyed the story.
I hope your muse gets you inspired and makes you finish this story.
Review By [nemogbr
] • Date [21 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Dragonelf
I hope you will get inspired to continue this story.
::Gives the plot bunny some carrot stew::
The fox knows many things, but
the hedgehog knows one big thing.
Review By [Dragonelf
] • Date [11 Oct 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from HiltonK
Really would appreciate more.
Go on, you know you want to....
Review By [HiltonK
] • Date [20 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Obsidian
This is a very good Story. I agree with the other. please continue.
Review By [Obsidian
] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from MarbleGlove
I realize that this story has ended here for a very long time but it's such a wonderful one that I keep on hoping to see more. And I come back every year or so to re-read it and enjoy what is here. I live in hope. And I really want to see Xander at the police station and Anita and Xander discussing the hellmouth. Mmm. Anyway, it really is a fabulous story.
Review By [MarbleGlove
] • Date [26 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]