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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am very impressed with your story. Excellent characterization and a really nice and logical plot. I can't wait for more.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [29 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Allyssiandra
Review:
Good idea... looking forward to more. But could you do something to clean your text up... This is how your 2nd chapter reads to me ...
¡°He was lurking in the hall.¡± Angel announced unaware of Giles¡¯ guest.
¡°It¡¯s okay, Angel.¡± Giles replied and Angel dropped his face. ¡°What are you doing here?¡±
¡°Looking for Buffy.¡±
Comments from author:
Sorry, I hope it looks better now.
Review By [Allyssiandra] • Date [23 Sep 04] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Zira
Review:
Great second chapter, but what's up with the speechmarks etc? It makes it really difficult to read.
Comments from author:
What speech marks? The italics?
Review By [Zira] • Date [22 Sep 04] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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