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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CPTSkip
I am very impressed with your story. Excellent characterization and a really nice and logical plot. I can't wait for more.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [29 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Allyssiandra
Good idea... looking forward to more. But could you do something to clean your text up... This is how your 2nd chapter reads to me ...
¡°He was lurking in the hall.¡± Angel announced unaware of Giles¡¯ guest.
¡°It¡¯s okay, Angel.¡± Giles replied and Angel dropped his face. ¡°What are you doing here?¡±
¡°Looking for Buffy.¡±
Comments from author:
Sorry, I hope it looks better now.
Review By [Allyssiandra] • Date [23 Sep 04] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Zira
Great second chapter, but what's up with the speechmarks etc? It makes it really difficult to read.
Comments from author:
What speech marks? The italics?
Review By [Zira] • Date [22 Sep 04] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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