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Review of chapter "Four Founding Fathers" from ChloeWinchester
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This is really good so far. I love the Buffy/Oliver pairing, please update soon.
Review By [ChloeWinchester] • Date [16 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Four Founding Fathers" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
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Hi, i'm loving the story so far. Do you plan to continue it?
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [16 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Four Founding Fathers" from CharmedSlayer
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Love where the story is heading... I do like the fact that you put Buffy in Slytherin and not Gryffindor where she is usually put
Nice pairing choice... I cant wait to read it.... I have a couple of questions though
1) Is buffy still in the reality where Vampires and Demons and her friends exsist?
2) Will the Scoobies be playing any part in this story?
3) Is either one of Buffy's former lovers going to cause any trouble?... (( LOL :P i love trouble in the ranks))
Review By [CharmedSlayer] • Date [20 Jun 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Four Founding Fathers" from Slayer
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tell me when your finished

--Dagnir--
Review By [Slayer] • Date [30 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Four Founding Fathers" from ScruffyBunny
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Really liking the story so far, as I do most Buffy/Oliver pairings. i am curious though as to how he got the DD assistant position, wouldn't be be more suited to Quiddich instruction (or something of the sort). Do the other Proffs know what she is? And wow did she make the decision to stay really quickly. I think that you may be rushing the story along. I mean after all that has happened to her do you really think that she would be thinking about Oliver as a potential boyfriend. I really hope that you update soon I can't wait to see the extent of her magical abilities and what kind of wand that she gets. Bravo!!!!!
Review By [ScruffyBunny] • Date [20 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Four Founding Fathers" from CharmedChick
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You just can't make this one simple for Oliver can you? I mean, I love her in Gryffendor, but, Slytherin always made soooo much sense. I would totally love you if you made her beat the living daylights out of Draco. Joahn
Review By [CharmedChick] • Date [6 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Four Founding Fathers" from raven
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This chapter was a large divergence from the previous ones; unfortunately it was not to the story's benefit. Fawkes is not pink. Why does it occur to Buffy that she doesn't want to go home? How is she suddenly going to be a seventh year with no prior training? Wand? Schoolbooks? Clothes? The explanations for the houses was extremely biased, use your HP books or one of the many internet sites to clarify, there is far more to the houses than "smart, brave, loyal, scheming".
Review By [raven] • Date [6 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Four Founding Fathers" from Friddle
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Oh! I really liked this chapter. I'm really glad you brought in the golden trio and Malfoy. I love Malfoy bashing! I'm hoping Buffy will do some SERIOUS bashing in the next chapter! I think its really cool how you put her in Slytherin. I would have either chosen Slytherin or Gryffindor, of course. But I understand why you put her in Slytheirn. the whole dark power thing. Anyway! Great job! Update soooonnn.... Friddle
Review By [Friddle] • Date [5 Aug 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Girl That Fell From The Sky" from Friddle
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Hi. It's me again. I like this chapter. It's a little short but it's still good. I think its cool how Buffy woke up earlier than she was supposed to, like cuz of her Slayer healing powers. And I like the way you portrayed Oliver. He seemed very intrigued by Buffy and learning more about her. Keep posting! Friddle
Review By [Friddle] • Date [5 Aug 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of story "Screw Logic" from VillageOrchid
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Okay.... this was a very nice chapter. You do well with dialog pacing. The story was told in this chapter mainly through dialog and a little bit of other description. Effectively. Ron... well.... kind of sounded like some of the recaps either Sam Carter or Daniel Jackson gave in recent season's epsidodes of SG1. Very cavalier, but not much to indicate the character.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Aug 04] • Rating [7 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of chapter "The Girl That Fell From The Sky" from VillageOrchid
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Pretty good language and style choices... Oliver comes across as very star-struck. Do you have any men or boys to read this before you post? I'm identifying too closely with the voice you've given Oliver. Maybe it's just a first person thing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Take It This Isn't Hell..." from CharmedChick
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I love it!!! I know that a lot of people do the buffy juming inot Glory's portal thing, but i like them, they make explaining easier! Anyway, great story, and Buffy/Oliver, Yeah!!! There aren't enough of those either! Joahn
Review By [CharmedChick] • Date [5 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Take It This Isn't Hell..." from VillageOrchid
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Nice start to your story. thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Take It This Isn't Hell..." from gigglygurl
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Hiya! I really like this so far. You had better update soon. Weird, I wonder why more people haven't reviewed? This is a great story so far, and you're an awesome writer. Please update soon, okie dokie?
Review By [gigglygurl] • Date [5 Aug 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Take It This Isn't Hell..." from Friddle
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Hey. I really like this fic. You give a good depth to ur characters. I like how Buffys kinda dumbstruck from the portal thing. Confuzed and all. Plus, I've only read a few Oliver Wood/Buffy Summers fics and this one is probably gonna turn out good. One thing though. Will this have anything with a fight with voldemort or something? Just curious. keep posting.

friddle
Review By [Friddle] • Date [5 Aug 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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