Although you could add another chapter or two, I think the ending you have is very good. The story was wonderful...it captured my attention from beginning to end. Many times I found myself chuckling, and many others, I just sat in awe watching the images play out in my head.

Brilliant making Spike into a daywalker and the connection between the him and Willow. I always did like those two together.

I enjoyed your story very much and look forward to reading more from you.

It would be sooo nice if you would please come back and finish this loverly story. Will Willow and Spike be a couple, will Sarah and Jareth come back together? Is Glory gone for good?

I realize that you have probably dropped this story.... .but please finish it!!

I love it and you must update soon

I suppose this could be considered finished, even though it isn't marked complete, but I don't want it to be. Willow / Spike is delicious the way you do it and Sarah / Jareth is fun.

:) J'aime j'aime j'aime.
It's 5am and I've just finished reading this. I didn't know there were Labyrinth fics on TTH. *Is excited*
Anyway, I'm gonna go to sleep now, but I wanted to tell you I very muchly enjoyed your story :) It made my night.

Adellia *tired*

AHH!! FINALLY!!! I've been wanting to review this fic since yesterday! Not that I have anything really important to say, but I REALLY had to say it.
...What was it...
AH!
I just wanted to say that I spent 6 hours reading all the Labyrinth fics that I never knew were on this site, and yours happened to be the last one I read. SO, completely bypassing the whole cliche of 'saving the best for last', I must say that I was uber-happy to see a bit of Willow/Spike. I haven't seen that in ages, and you wrote them so well!! And, while I adore all of your Harry Potter stories to DEATH (Blaise/Luna: best pairing ever!), I admit that it was refreshing to see you write another genre--with two pairings that I also adore--so very well.
If you ever get around to updating this fic, know that I'll be one very mucho-uber-happy reader!

ZOMG! IT'S BEEN LIKE, OMG, EIGHTEEN MONTHS!!

*jokes* - I read your LJ. It's so funny, I finally watched Labyrinth and went in search of fic; got halfway through this one and thought 'this is sort of echo's style of writing...surely I would have noticed if she was the author'...apparently not! It's sort of complete in itself, anyway. Ambiguity makes a decent change to the usual stuff - not yours, specifically, but fanfic endings in general get boring...epilogues are definitely overrated.

I never got round to reading this- mostly because I've never seen Labyrinth but I'm really glad I did! You given a very clear idea of Jareth and the general 'ness to a person who has never seen the film. So, kudos to you!

Oh my Jebus! Angel poofy! Beautiful! Laughing my butt off! This is great!

I absolutely love this story! I'm a huge spike/willow shipper....as well as Labrynth being my favorite movie of all time! Keep it up please!

Oh, is this the end? Mostly resolved but not completely resolved. Kinda like life in progress, and heading of into a spanking new AU. Interesting and good.

Some really incredible use of language, characterization, description and pacing in the last two chapters. Good show!

Charming and compelling so far. Nice job of combining romance edges with angsty, danger plot.
Still some very distracting typos in the first part, though.

ok, do ya wanna tell me why you don't have any reviews on this one? it RULEs!!!!!!!!!! Sarah better stop being so full of herself SOON, or else i'll have to hop through my mirror and beat the crap outta her. Spikey and Wills are soooo cuute!!!!! the whole turning Glory into a goblin, PRICELESS!!! after you are finished with this -since i'm going to SUPPOSE this is not the end- are you gonna make a sequel? I hope soooo! more soon ~VBC~