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Review of chapter "Sleep Depraved" from Infinix
Review:
That actually isn't a half bad way to finish this story. Infinitely preferable to you trying to make something work that you just have no ideas for.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sleep Depraved" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sleep Depraved" from APS
Review:
My thought about the fic as a whole.

Great story,
keep up the good work.
Review By [APS] • Date [9 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Arrivals" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrivals" from purrfus
Review:
This has some really nice bits and pieces, but they don't all come together. It really feels as if someone or thing took the pages, cut them into strips, then took away a bunch of the strips, and posted the remainder. There are also some spots were things are less then clear. For instance when the door is opened to the red-headed person no one else is mentioned as waiting on the step, but while Rupert and Renee are mentioned, Willow is not, even though a later conversation indicates she did in fact arrive presumably as the red head with Giles and Renee.

Just out of curiosity how old is Renee. Presumably she is one of the slayers called which with canon would make her 25 to 30 younger than Giles. Hopefully not jailbait.

This story is marked complete, but is left hanging with no real ending? Were you planning to come back, edit, and increase?
Comments from author:
I was. Then I discovered I had no way to continue. The new chapter I have added brought the story to a close
Review By [purrfus] • Date [6 Dec 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Arrivals" from Caliadragon
Review:
I really like where this is going and I especially liked the way that Xander reacted to them wanting to leave him behind and the crack about the demon was dead on Xander.


Thanks


Calia
Comments from author:
spent so long trying to figure out how to continue this. now I've got a concluding chapter up instead.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [8 Oct 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stress" from Caliadragon
Review:
This is positivly hilarious! I am really enjoying this fic and I can not wait to see what shocking and amusing thing Xander does to the X-Men next.

Thanks

calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beginnings" from JadeSama
Review:
This is not a bad review, something just jumped out of him in the very beginning of this chapter. You said that the Magus made the axe for Hawk, but in the book 'Beyond the Blue Moon' Hawk tells us that he got the axe from the High Warlock before he locked himself in his tower and died. Hawk then lost the axe in the end of the book when Jerico Lament, Fisher and Hawk used the light of creation to kill the Demon Prince and the other supernatural creatures inhabiting that space.
Sorry about the... tone of this, but honestly I'm not trying to be mean, but I just saw that and said to myself, "That's not right..." Then I went and read the four books again. This is a really good story even with that little bit. I enjoyed it a lot, keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
*blinks* I could have sworn the high warlock was also called Magus...
Review By [JadeSama] • Date [28 Aug 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Xandered day" from Caliadragon
Review:
I look forward to seeing what will happen next. I loved Hank's thought of a hero with a sugar addiction. That definately fits Xander to a T.

Thanks and more soon I hope.


Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [10 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Xandered day" from CPTSkip
Review:
Cool! Willow and Xander together can cause so much more havoc than just Xander alone. I like the Xander/Storm pairing and Willow has a new girlfriend? I'm not sure I would let a one-eyed man pilot a plane though. Especially a super high performance one. Takeoffs and flying are not the problem, but landing with no depth perception would be a bitch. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprises" from CPTSkip
Review:
I once read that whenever Mickey Spillane hit a plot dry spell he'd have two thuggs burst through the door and beat Mike Hammer up. Lol! Maybe you need to come up with a Big Bad that needs both the X-Men and Xander/Scoobies to fight. Maybe a mutant who has been turned into a vampire? Or maybe a mutant who can tap the Wild Magic from Greene's world? I hope you can work through your block because I like your story and would love to see Xander kick some more evil butts.
Comments from author:
hmmm... the mutant into vampire is already taken in Lucinda's "A prince among Toads" though she hasn't updated in awhile. Last thing I want to do is interfere with that one.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [8 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprises" from Caliadragon
Review:
This is such a great fic and I loved Xander's reaction to Storm. Thanks and more soon I hope.

Calia
Comments from author:
My thing is, I simply have no idea how to continue. My writing only touches romance lightly, so I can't do much of a focus on him and storm... and I've run out of plot.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [8 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who Needs A Slayer?" from Caliadragon
Review:
I am seriously enjoying this. I think Xander and Logan are gonna get on really well. Thanks and more soon I hope.


Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [7 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who Needs A Slayer?" from CPTSkip
Review:
This story is a real barnburner. I love it and hope you write more. You've done a good job on catching Xander's personality. I just hope he gets a girl who isn't a demon or ex-demon, doesn't want to kill him and/or eat him. Lol!
Comments from author:
your "gets a girl" comment caused chapter 4. But I'm stuck now. *grin*
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [7 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Destined" from Caliadragon
Review:
This looks very interesting and I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks and more soon I hope.

Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [6 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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