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Review of chapter "Naked" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Found this... Very fun! Such a shame to end here but I suppose that's why we are granted with imaginations ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [2 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Naked" from (Recent Donor)ArgyleButterfly
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You are doing a great job! Please continue this story.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ArgyleButterfly] • Date [6 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Naked" from JeanClaudeslover
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ohhh i like this its really funny and i hope you continue soon
Review By [JeanClaudeslover] • Date [21 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Naked" from spring
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LOL love it please continue this fic SOON!
Review By [spring] • Date [20 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Naked" from CountessMary
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yeah, there really needs to be more of this. I don't know how long it's been since you've updated... but there needs to be more of this and that's for damn sure.
Review By [CountessMary] • Date [30 Aug 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Naked" from throwingit
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Yay an update *does a jig* I loved this chapter it was fun and the story is getting good. I am eagarly awaiting the next chapter.
Review By [throwingit] • Date [14 Dec 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Confusion" from Slayergirl
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Cool a love potion, I'm in love with this story already.
Review By [Slayergirl] • Date [21 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Confusion" from Keshkreature
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Very cute ;) So did Snape accidentally give her the wrong potion? Looking forward to finding out. Hope Buffy doesn't kill him. =)
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [10 Sep 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Confusion" from iceyflame
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Hey. I really like your story. Buffy, and Snape are so cute together. I wonder how Buffy got the love potion. Sorry for the short review, but I really like your story, and I hope you continue. So update soon. Thanks!
Review By [iceyflame] • Date [24 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Confusion" from throwingit
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Dun dun dun. A love potion eh? neat twist. I glad that you added another chapter I thought you were just going to leave it as a stand alone I'm happy that theres more. Keep up the exellent work.
Review By [throwingit] • Date [24 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Itchy" from VillageOrchid
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Okay, nicely done as a concept, but you're looking for "room for improvment," yes?

Explain why Buffy decided to stay or had to stay after she was teleported. Are they in an alternate universe, or was it that once things were explained she was asked to stay to help defend and teach and study (sort of like a graduate school fellowship), and didn't have anything else pressing.
Perhaps you may also write a scene were Buffy decides to take a shower (after the potion working), reviews what happened, thinks *he couldn't possibly* and then cut to her arrive in his dungeon dressed to the nines. Any sort of double take scene where she doesn't get it at first, but then thinks about it a bit will be funny and add to the depth of the story.

Thanks for sharing!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Aug 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Itchy" from CPTSkip
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Lol! I guess the Snapeman just learned that when you cure a Slayer of an itch, you have to cure all their itches. Good thing Faith wasn't there or the poor man would be very dead. Happy, but still dead. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [10 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Itchy" from throwingit
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Cool! I love this story please tell me you'll add more *gives author puppy dog look*
Review By [throwingit] • Date [9 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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