Review of chapter "Immortal Night" from dulcinea
Really great characterization! I love how you painted Asher through Chanterelle's eyes.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I wanted to convey that she was only catching a few things, and to show the picture that was forming in her mind, which isn't always quite the same as reality.
Review By [dulcinea
] • Date [12 Aug 04] • Not Rated