Review of chapter "Chapter the Second" from Allyndra
Cute! I like the reference to a Dawn-Connor friendship, and I enjoyed Connor's matter of fact summary of his life. The only change I would recommend is a reformatting of chapter 2. It's a littl ehard to read as is. Otherwise, it's a fun glimpse at Connor, and the ending is great.
Review By [Allyndra
] • Date [2 Nov 06] • Not Rated