TtH • Reviews • parallel worlds, same cause

Review of chapter "DORIS, the annoying secretary" from (Past Donor)

Review:

do u have a beta? if not get one cause this story is intresting but it's needing a bit more. I liked some of it but its moving super fast and some of it doesnt click together right, every writer has bad fics and everyfic needs somethign done to it. U have a good idea u just need ot work on it a little more, i know some good beta's if u need one if u already have one u should get another one, u can never have to many betas.

Comments from author:

Thanks for your comments. I value your criticisms and i'll keep workin to improve my fics. i should have more fics coming soon

Review By [ (Past Donor)

lckybr] • Date [15 Aug 04] • Not Rated

Review of chapter ""My spells against yours!"" from fanfictionfanatic

Review:

Great idea for a story! I am really enjoying it so far. Loved Ron's antics. Hope he is okay. Can't wait to read more.

Review By [fanfictionfanatic] • Date [15 Aug 04] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "parallel worlds, same cause" from VillageOrchid

Review:

Ah, an interesting start. Looking forward to seeing if Willow's hair stayed black.

Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [15 Aug 04] • Not Rated

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