Review of chapter "The Zabini/Granger date" from gothgirl
Review:
Holy freak dude! Finish it! It's really good.
Review By [gothgirl] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Zabini/Granger date" from spring
Review:
Oh come on! You are being cruel to not continue this fic! I really really really want to know what happens next! I personally think that this fic is wonderful; I love it. PLEASE please update/finish this wonderful fic!
Review By [spring] • Date [4 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I would consider revising your rating given the summary of your fic clearly states that there is subject matter that does not belong in anything less than nc17.
Jinni Owner
Comments from author:
??? The fic is rated 18. I don't understand what the problem is. If you wish to go into more details, please contact me.
Review of chapter "Bathroom Antics (the naughty bit)" from Amye
Review:
*cackles* that was funny! Very good, although you may want to consider getting a beta reader as there are quite a few mistakes with punctuation, grammar etc. I'll do it, if you want, because it's a good fic, but some people may be put off by it. On the whole, though, it was great! I snorted half way through and got a very strange look off my dad...so it was very funny! Well Done.