Seriously a really great fic. Though it would be nice if Xander would stay and work in Initiative. But given fact that he pointed out a mistake of using demons as a template to creating super soldier it might have been a no go(though i doubt that his word alone would stop that from happening). But all in all i really enjoyed it.
Review By [Piterio] • Date [22 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Was a decent story till it turned into another "Xander must stay virgin till he marries!!!" cliche.
Stay a virgin till he turns 18? WTF is wrong with you? You never been in highschool? Damn sure as hell never served in any military i'm betting. Only way this makes sense is if you were in catholic school and got molested one to many times and think sex is evil.
Review By [Downery] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Rating [3 out of 10]
I'm a bit surprised he would choose Army over SEALs, after all, he has Clarke's memories and Clarke was a SEAL...so wouldn't he hold fondness for the SEALs and/or the Navy-Army rivalry? So if he goes to college, it's really just a cover for working for Clarke...and if he does Army...he'd pretty much eventually end up working for Clarke anyway? Would be be leader of the possible demon hunting teams either way? Nice job.
Review By [shadowflame] • Date [19 Aug 11] • Not Rated
As someone who's been a Tom Clancy fan since "Hunt..." first appeared, I found this to be an absolutely fascinating and enjoyable story. Myself, I'd suggest college for him as life gets more "interesting" for officers but it's his choice; in any case, I'm certain he'll have quite a time no matter what choice he makes (be funny if he did go the college route and met up with "Chavez" at Georgetown).
Two thumbs up for a really enjoyable story.
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [15 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I'm still reading the fic (and liking it A LOT) when I found "[...] and then told him where the Curcitacium (spelling?) was happening." I'm telling you now (otherwise by the end of the fic I'll have forgotten about it): the correct spelling is "Cruciamentum" Bye (and keep up the good writing!) Zanfib PS: Dawn-Xander or Faith-Xander fics are always appreciated!
Review By [Zanfib] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I recently re-read this story and I have to say that I absolutely love your work! I love this story!! And I really want you to hurry up and write the sequel!!!
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [5 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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