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Without Mercy Or Remorse

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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from ChefJackButler
Review:
I know its been 10 years and you're likely long gone, but can I just say how fucking annoying all those interjectory author's notes are? Save that crap for the top of the page, or even better the bottom. Don't interrupt the narrative.


EDIT: By the way, barring that really irritating problem that almost made me stop the story, it was pretty enjoyable. Did you mean to end it where it was?
Comments from author:
Yes you can. It was my first big story and I made lots of mistakes. I leave them in there to remind me what not to do.
Review By [ChefJackButler] • Date [30 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from eriktheviking
Review:
Still one of the greats.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [23 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Delkatar
Review:
Great story!
Review By [Delkatar] • Date [2 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Harry
Review:
OH, seeing SO many familiar faces in this last chapter! Chedwiggen from JAG, Mulder and Scully, and seeing Xander's mom healthy and clean for the first time in SO LONG, it brings a big smile to my face! Now, two things: 1) Sequel. YOU HAVE to do a sequel! The ending demands it! 2) If you do go with a squad that Xander would be the top kick or Co of, I have a great way for you to test it out. On this site, go to the Stargate section, click on all stories, and look for the Code Ragnarok material. I think that this version of Xander and his team would fit in PERFECTLY with what is going on!
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Harry
Review:
W&H! *Shudders* I KNOW why the Sunnydale Radar went off like that! That place is DEMON CENTRAL! BIG TIME! No wonder his orders were to deliver and get out of there PDQ ASAP!
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Harry
Review:
I think that Angelus would have been dust if not for Whistler and the orders from the PTB. But, its time for Xander to get out of town. He's made it too hot for him to be on the west coast, let along LA. I think that Jack has something special in mind for him.
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Harry
Review:
Buffy, you were TOLD that you should not do stupid things like inviting Angel/Angelus into your house, but did you listen? NOOOOOOOOOOO! You almost got your mother and sister killed because of that! The only thing saving your hide from being dead PERMANENTLY is Jack Clark's presence. But, you WILL have to answer to Giles and the Council for your actions!
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Harry
Review:
Buffy, you just faced Alexander. You had DAMN well get your act together before everything goes to Hell in a hand basket! *Reference to what the Season 2 finale was* And Jack Clark? Could HE be the soldier that Xander got the memories from? If it was, this is going to be VERY good!
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Without Mercy Or Remorse" from Harry
Review:
This is a version of Xander I can see and live with. Sounds a lot like the Xander in the Wandererverse: Work from the Shadows to help those who can't help themselves.
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
I've read this 3 times and I still love it! Joss should have used it as it was better than his stuff! You ever thought of a sequel?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Piterio
Review:
Seriously a really great fic. Though it would be nice if Xander would stay and work in Initiative. But given fact that he pointed out a mistake of using demons as a template to creating super soldier it might have been a no go(though i doubt that his word alone would stop that from happening). But all in all i really enjoyed it.
Review By [Piterio] • Date [22 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Wow, great story!
This seriously needs a sequel...if you can please!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Downery
Review:
Was a decent story till it turned into another "Xander must stay virgin till he marries!!!" cliche.

Stay a virgin till he turns 18? WTF is wrong with you? You never been in highschool? Damn sure as hell never served in any military i'm betting. Only way this makes sense is if you were in catholic school and got molested one to many times and think sex is evil.
Review By [Downery] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from shadowflame
Review:
I'm a bit surprised he would choose Army over SEALs, after all, he has Clarke's memories and Clarke was a SEAL...so wouldn't he hold fondness for the SEALs and/or the Navy-Army rivalry? So if he goes to college, it's really just a cover for working for Clarke...and if he does Army...he'd pretty much eventually end up working for Clarke anyway? Would be be leader of the possible demon hunting teams either way? Nice job.
Review By [shadowflame] • Date [19 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Cateagle
Review:
As someone who's been a Tom Clancy fan since "Hunt..." first appeared, I found this to be an absolutely fascinating and enjoyable story. Myself, I'd suggest college for him as life gets more "interesting" for officers but it's his choice; in any case, I'm certain he'll have quite a time no matter what choice he makes (be funny if he did go the college route and met up with "Chavez" at Georgetown).

Two thumbs up for a really enjoyable story.
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [15 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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