Oh, this was simply fantastic!! I really enjoyed your characterization of Dawn - She was wonderfully adult and mature without losing her earlier spunky "Dawnie" nature. Interesting idea too with her jobs and education - I like the idea of her as an intellectual, while still being able to kick ass =)
I also loved the Dawn/Wolverine pairing! The chemistry worked really well in this and I liked how you didn't rush it - no sudden "I love you" crap. Great job with blending both verses together too.
Anyhoo, this was a seriously good story! Thanks for writing!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [10 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I absolutely loved this story, and this pairing! It was very well written and I love how you didn't just suddenly say that mutants have existed all along, but that you said they began showing up years after the hellmouth imploded...
There's no telling the trouble Dawn and the X-men would get up to... Tuesdays especially... Any plans for a sequel?
Review By [BlackBettie] • Date [14 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I really hope you get inspired to write a sequel or two to this story.
::Gives the plot bunny some carrot soup::
#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=# "Last night I dreamed I ate a ten- pound marshmallow, and when I woke up the pillow was gone." - Tommy Cooper #=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [17 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Epilogue? As in "done?" "Through?" "Complete?" "Finished?" No More?" That can't possibly be accurate, because that would be a crime! I'd hate to have to turn you over to the fic-police.
This was fantastac! There are clearly not enough Dawn fics out there, Which I don't understand, because she's hotter than the whole rest of the cast put together... Anyway, the potential of this fic is fascinating! The Watcher's Council working with the X-men! Fabulous! I really hope that you decide to continue this story!
Thank you for giving us this much, at least. I really hope to see more!
- Fyrecat
Review By [Fyrecat] • Date [15 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
*laughs* She has grown up hasn't she? The both of them. But I have to say Rogue's talk had me shaking my head. Find Bobby wherever she stashed him indeed *grins*
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [21 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Remarkable *Snorts* That was so the Prof. Using big words in an understated way :-D He and Giles would get along so well. Except G-man is more in a sarcastic way. Dawn isn't going to be a mutant is she?
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [21 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Oh brother. Only with a Scoob. Everything goes perfect. Then ONE *tiny* misshap and the entire world goes off kilter for them and mankind as we know it.
Cools.
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [21 Dec 07] • Not Rated