that was fairly in sync with the original episode, adding xander to the mix. keep up the good work.

Brilliant :)

I'd expected Xander to be a bit more emotional at seeing Janeway after her older self sacrificed herself in a suicide play. I was expecting him to chew her out or hug her. Possibly both at the same time. He does have that surviors guilt thing going for him. Brilliant work tho'.

Fantastic! Keep it coming!!! ^_^

I have a feeling Marshall will sire Carmel before Xander gives her a way to fight it. And she will have all her brain functioning. After all, that's because of him she went crazy! He gave her the strenght to fight the change, and it cost her her sanity. I think it's sad, I really did like her! And please no killing of Jab or Zan! Pretty please?

Just a little review to say I love your story. I hope this time Dee survives... and maybe Carmel? (if it's the name of she-vamp). And will we get to see Judy again? I love that ship. Keep the good work!

Not about to let out too many secrets; but I CAN tell you that Judy returns in the next story :-)

While I am interested in seeing Xander in what amounts to Colossus-form, I do recommend you get a beta. While you aren't quite at the level of ick that would get you deleted immediately, you are treading close to the spelling/grammar quality rules that either are implemented at present, or will soon be in force. I'd hate to see this story lost.

I'm in the process of that now :-)

Hopefully have one soon, I've had a few offers, but I write, FAST and hate to back track on myself, which is my problem :-) It drives most people mad.

This story, will never be lost, the marvels of having a domain all your own. it's listed on the header of my newest fics if you want to have a look, but I'd wait a few days as it's not fully working yet.


Siege


p.s. Just noticed you're a mod, well done on that :-) please don't delete me :-)

Just wanted to let you know that I am reading and loving this story, keep it up.

OHHH!!! That is SOOOO unfair??!! You can’t just leave it there???? When is the next piece coming?? I just found the Yahoo Group refrence and haven’t had a chance to check it yet. Is there more posted there???? I laughed my ass off through most of this... I love this Xander. *Wiping drool* Can I have a piece of that please??? Yum... Tasty. Better than Chocolate. This is an ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS series! I am officially in love with the Prometheus Verse. WE MUST HAVE MORE!!!!!

The Prometheus-Verse group is dead you can find the stories at my site, listed on the profile here and my group with is :-
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Fevered-Imaginings/


Hope this helps you out.

p.s. There will be more coming soon I promise, just slaying a few bunny's first.

This is such an amazing fic and I look forward to seeing where it goes next. Thanks and more soon I hope.



Calia