Great chapter. I can't wait to see what Hellboy does when Myers tells him Dawn left. Is Willow done in the story? or is she gonna stay with Sawn?
Review By [Jinky] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Returning To The BPRD" from Lucinda
Review:
Interesting. I like the facts that a) Dawn wanted a normal life b) it didn't fall into her lap and c) she was trying to resist being sucked back into vast amounts of weirdness. Granted, it's probably a more interesting story because she's being sucked back into weridness, but it's very human of her to want 'normal' for a while.
Lucinda
Review By [Lucinda] • Date [24 Aug 04] • Not Rated
First let me say that I originally thought that a Dawn/Hellboy paring was totally impossible. But you've sold me on the concept. I thought your Dawn was totally believable and really quite sweet. And your Hellboy is not only true to the movie and comic book, but comes across as a nice guy. Well done. I hope you write more to this story as I now think Dawn and Hellboy would actually make a cute couple. Of course I hope she tells Buffy and the Scoobies about him before they visit and toast his butt before they find out he is a good guy. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting the Team" from Zakhynsia
Review:
way awesome. i love the pairing and the plot so far. very original and all. keep going.
Review By [Zakhynsia] • Date [22 Aug 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]