It's true that this story is a little confusing at points, but it's definitely a powerful idea, and it currently ends at a very dramatic point! I hope you're inspired to post more on it, someday.
Review By [bookworm] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Oh wow!!! This story was so cool!! I can't believe that the author didn't finish the story! The story was left on a four year cliffhanger! Xander is on the verge of becoming Balthezor Jr.!! Willow and the sisters have to figure out a way to rescue Cole and explain to him what is going on, because he will probably be the only one who might be able to stop Xander! Cause Xander didn't seem to be feeling the maternal concern and love from Phoebe when he was talking to her. I would love to know what happens next!
Review By [kayron] • Date [20 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review By [lorwen] • Date [20 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from AlecMcDowell
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Ooooh I'm bummed you left this here! I see you've still been writing on here so I guess that your train for this story left completely. That's really too bad I'd have loved to see the resolution.
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from IceWhisper
Review:
You can't just end it there!!!! Are you ever planning to update this?!
Review By [IceWhisper] • Date [19 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This story was going great! What happened? Is there any chance of finishing this fic? They still need to get Cole back. They still need to fix Xander. They need to introduce father and son. Somebody needs to tell 'Deadboy' so he can get revenge on 'Demonboy'.
Review By [kayron] • Date [11 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
You ONLY get the ten and not something higher because you have been evil and not updated his beyond wonderful fic in oh...... two YEARS! One question why no updates?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? I love what you have written so far so please please let me know if this fic is going to be updated because I think that it is a wonderful fic and deserves to be finished.
Review By [spring] • Date [12 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from daratrazanoff
Review:
Great story!! Don't leave it hanging. Update soon!!
Review By [daratrazanoff] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]