Awesome story! Well written, good mystery, believable magic-babble. I can't think of the last time I enjoyed a story so must as to devote an hour to it on Christmas morning. Can't wait to read the follow-up.
Review By [AngelaM] • Date [25 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three - Strength" from HebiR
Review:
Like the story so far, but slight grammer correction: you keep using "they're" as in, they are, instead of "their," as in belonging to them.
I don't watch Law and Order : SVU very often, so I had to refresh my memory on the characters from that 'verse, but other than that, I had a lovely time reading this story. I love how you portrayed Buffy as the hunter I always think of her as. The fact that both Buffy and Dawn are more grown up and mature was nice and I liked that in the end Munch knew mostly what Buffy was. Thanks for the good read.
I've never watched SVU, but I thoroughly enjoyed this story! You managed to be thought-provoking as well as tell a good story with recognizable and believable characters.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [15 Jun 09] • Not Rated
I'll admit that I don't watch nearly as much L&O as I should, but I thoroughly enjoyed this story and how you worked Dawn and Buffy into the cop world.
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [4 Feb 09] • Not Rated
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [25 Aug 08] • Not Rated
That was very interesting. Wonderful story! I like how you had Dawn and Buffy throughout the entire thing.
Review By [MercyJones] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve - Discussions" from SpacedCadet
Review:
“Our killer is intelligent,” Dr. Wong said. “He also believes in this ritual. He would have done as much research as he could into how it works and what he would need before the first murder.”
But wasn't it stated earlier that he was mostly following the ritual out of habit? This is a big change from saying he was just getting off on the killing.
That nit aside, I am really enjoying this.
Please finish the other stories in this series!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [13 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Absolutely brilliant! I love the grown-up, positive direction you took the Buffyverse characters, the way Buffy uses her inner Slayer, Cragen's good sense not to look a given horse too deeply into its teeth, and last but not least, Stabler getting a lesson in not underestimating little girls :)
Review By [ColonelPeroxide] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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