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Review of chapter "Down the rabbit hole" from Glumski
Review:
Oh wow, this is great! It's definitely one of the best BtVS/SG1-Crossovers and even though the initial meeting of Buffy and Jack was kind of generic this story is very much a unique one. I also loved the characters and especially the intricate relationships between them.
The introduction of Yolanda Cortez is a little... weird though. She souns a lot like a possible Mary Sue though at this point of the story it's nothing to criticize yet. Still, her being the new lesbian member of SG-1 around the same Willow gets introduced to the Mountain, well, it looks a little fabricated.
Apart from that I got nuthin' bad. Which is totally amazing. There could've been a little more action of course but it wasn't boring so I guess that's a moot point.
I guess there won't be more updates in the future but I hope you'll come back to this anyway. I'd love to see A Change in the Weather continued! Thanks a lot for sharing this with us!
Review By [Glumski] • Date [26 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A meeting of Alphas" from (Current Donor)Starfox
Review:
Very interesting take on the "Buffy meets Jack" theme, and of courser a very original reaction from Sam to the revelation that magic exists.
Comments from author:
Thanks to you and other readers and commenters. I appreciate that people are still enjoying the (partial) story, even though real life has prevented me from following up with it. I got a message from locard that I would like to respond to, but I don't have an email address, so if you see this, Susan, email me with your email address.
Review By [(Current Donor)Starfox] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Down the rabbit hole" from NefariousPlots
Review:
Thank you for writing such an enjoyable story! I really enjoyed both the plot and the Buffy/Jack pairing. Also, your characterization was spot on.
Review By [NefariousPlots] • Date [28 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Down the rabbit hole" from (Recent Donor)draconin
Review:
What a great story! I just love the whole idea and you've portrayed everyone so well.

We do not see of what use we can be to you in answering
this threat, except, perhaps, to help in effecting an at least
partial evacuation from your planet.

Talk about cliff-hangers! Ok, I know the chances are not good given the time since your last update... but if the muse should strike *please* don't fight it! If only because the number of authors who understand the difference between effect and affect well enough to write that last sentence are sadly tiny. :-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)draconin] • Date [24 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Down the rabbit hole" from ebony
Review:
Ok really long time since the lat update but still hoping for more.
Review By [ebony] • Date [1 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Down the rabbit hole" from SarahLou
Review:
Really? That's it? :-( Awesome fic, seriously wish I knew what happened next but I'm guessing since it hasn't been updated in like six years there's not much chance...? Oh well! Fantastic fic up to where it cuts off at any rate :-)
Review By [SarahLou] • Date [17 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Down the rabbit hole" from AtotheM
Review:
Just reread this, still love it.

Hope you come back to it soon.. :)
Review By [AtotheM] • Date [24 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Down the rabbit hole" from thewrongalice
Review:
Thanks really enjoyed this - I'm guessing no chance of an update? ('cause of the last date updated) which is a pity - I think you've done a great job at building a relationship between Jack & Buffy, including the reactions of those around them.
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [22 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Down the rabbit hole" from AtotheM
Review:
Wow. That story is amazing so far. I hope some day you come back and finish it! I love the relationship you have between Jack and Buffy--and you've pulled them together so well, with little details (like her love of skating and his of hockey! genius!) And having Hammond already know, very nice. I'm very fond of your Teal'c too.

I hope you muse bug bites again!!
Review By [AtotheM] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Down the rabbit hole" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Evil Author\Muse = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a terrific story, so please stop being one of the Evilest of Authors\Muses.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [10 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Down the rabbit hole" from serenityselena
Review:
oh my .... that`s not good, not good at all ...
hope you`ll continue the story ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [19 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Down the rabbit hole" from SpacedCadet
Review:
More?

More!

MORE!MORE!!MORE!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [6 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Down the rabbit hole" from SnakeFox
Review:
I know that at this point, practically four years later, chances are you might not even visit this site any more, or use the same email account this review would be forwarded to. And even if you do, it seems overwhelmingly obvious you're not going to be continuing this story.

Still though, I just wanted to say that if that is the case, it's a massive shame. I mean this story is fantastically well written, with engaging and entertaining dialogue. I'm not sure I buy the whole "Goa'uld offshoot evolving from parasitical snakes into humanoid creatures" thing - might have worked better if they'd been an offshoot from the really old non-parasitical non-naquada-blooded Goa'uld they found fossils of, just a thought. But that's just by the by, it's the characters that make this story so awesome. Their thoughts and interactions come off as genuine, incredibly well written and thought out, and accurate to what we know of the characters.

Anyway, I guess I just wanted to say thanks. Even though it was unfinished, these 16 chapters still made for a very good read. So thank you for writing it and posting it, it was great.
Review By [SnakeFox] • Date [14 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Down the rabbit hole" from Kei
Review:
This is such a lovely story- I hope you continue it one day. I know I've certainly had to leave stories alone for much longer between updates, so I continue to hold out hope. Certain creations tend to etch onto my mind how I perceive different characters and though I gladly read anything well-written, this story always makes Buffy and Jack so much more believable to me than any other pairing. Thank you for sharing what you have, perhaps one day there will be more. I followed this story from your first updates and occasionally go back and reread it, just to remind myself how much I enjoy it.
Review By [Kei] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Down the rabbit hole" from ebony
Review:
This so can't be the end of the world, what happens next?
Review By [ebony] • Date [19 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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