Review of chapter "Resurrection" from Jerri
I enjoyed the premise.
Review By [Jerri
] • Date [3 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Resurrection" from TwistedSlinky
A little too dialogue-y for my taste, but I enjoyed the story nevertheless. Nice work :)
Review By [TwistedSlinky
] • Date [3 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Resurrection" from VillageOrchid
This story has a lot of good stuff going on in it. In the middle of the story, if you're thinking you might revise, I'd love to see a more extensive dramatization of the two groups explaining things to each other, and then a few more sarcastic comments in the second half of the story.
Good story as is, though.
Review By [VillageOrchid
] • Date [6 Sep 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]