I would love to see Xan with Tonks or maybe with Fred or George or some sort of combo I like my Xanders hetero or at least bi. as for the trio so as long as Ron gets lots of loven I'm fine.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [22 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Okay. Here is another story on my "I like the story even though it is unlikely to be added on to, but I'm gonna comment anyway" list. This story had a lot of potential. The war with Voldemort was still a pending concern. The relocated Scoobies had jumped into their new lives feet first, and hit the ground running. I loved the idea of them using more modern and versatile methods to teach the students. As Scoobies, they all knew that they couldn't always rely on the weapons (or in this case wands) they were fighting with. They planned to teach the Hogwarts students to adapt to physical fighting if necessary or to improvise. Xander, Willow, and Spike made a point to include the Slytherins and chastise (Seamus) those who discriminated against them for who their parents were. It would have given the Slytherines the idea that they had the option to choose the light, rather than automatically choose Voldie's side. I like that they were giving the students a chance to have more open and unbiased viewpoints. I loved all of Spike, Willow, and Xander's classroom interaction. As for pairings, I would have liked these: Willow/Severus (both intelligent and she could handle his snarkiness) Spike/Sirius (both enjoyed snarky humor) Xander/Remus (hyena/wolf) Harry/Draco (pulling the pigtails of the one you liked) Neville/Luna Hermoine/Blaise. Ah well.
Comments from author:
Actually this is one of the series that I have been going back over and I can say in all honesty that you have just spearheaded my bunny! The only pairing that you chose that won't be the same is Harry/Draco. I am fast becoming a Ron/Harry pairing, but I will do a threesome between the group. So the pairings will be as you requested except it will be Harry/Ron/Draco.
Thank you for reviewing and giving me an idea on where to take this series.
Calia
Review By [kayron] • Date [5 Feb 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I like this one a lot better than the other one. I do have to state though that this one states that it is the first in the series and that the other is the second and that makes no sense when reading it.
"whom many of you will remember as our third year DADA professor", your insinuating that he was everyone from all grades third year DADA teacher. you were talking to the whole school their, right?
I like this hope you continue. I thought it was interesting.
You totally need Xander commenting about Harry and Draco and the correlation between them and him and Cordy, in their bitching.
Review By [Duskie] • Date [4 Apr 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Tho' I hate to admit it you have a point about the slytherins.
Kinda overdone making about 75% of the characters gay-Bi. You really shouldn't mess with character traits like that unless they haven't been stated in canon and allow you some decent leeway to play with it and even then it should be done sparingly so it's believable.
Review By [dogbertcarroll] • Date [1 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Wow! Just one spelling thingy that I found - and that's pretty damn good. (it's Zabini, not Zambini!) I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm gathering OotP didn't happen? Please write more!
Review By [Zira] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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