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Review of chapter "Shattered Hearts" from AzrielSunHawk
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as for xan and spike getting along, i would think as they are so focused on willow, that they'd bypass the goodnatured teasing & squabbling, and the part of the prophesy where the 3 are connected kinda kicks in there as well. i would think anyway.

seriously, please write more!!
Review By [AzrielSunHawk] • Date [29 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shattered Hearts" from AzrielSunHawk
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umm, i really like this.. any chance your going to write more on it? or is it dead in the water?
thanks!
Scarlet
Review By [AzrielSunHawk] • Date [29 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shattered Hearts" from Duskie
Review:
Nice.
I think you need to change it to Harry Potter opposed to charmed. They were only mentioned briefly.
Review By [Duskie] • Date [4 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shattered Hearts" from Elleria
Review:
Interesting....
Review By [Elleria] • Date [8 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shattered Hearts" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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Spike has no soul, the only thing keeping him from killing humans for kicks in that chip. Why would they disable it? Spike and Xander are getting along far too well. They like arguing with each other. Without that it's kinda dull.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [1 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shattered Hearts" from fanfictionfanatic
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What an interesting idea for a story! Making the HP world a different reality. And just when I wanted to smack Buffy, Dawn & Giles, they reveal they were trying to protect them by getting them to leave. Can't wait to read more and see what you have in store.
Review By [fanfictionfanatic] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shattered Hearts" from raven
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Interesting start-I like that Minerva is setting up to be a mentor to Willow. Bit surprised that everyone went the "drive them away" route to beat the prophecy. Bit overused. Not sure about the old DADA teacher either-granted, it gave a bit of comic relief but for Dumbledore to go with that whole scene seemed a bit OOC. May want to establish if he was Hogwarts or Ministry chosen. There were problems throughout the chapter with mistaken words-and for a, etc. Should do a quick edit when you get the chance.
Review By [raven] • Date [8 Sep 04] • Not Rated
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