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Review of chapter "One: The Dopple Effect" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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Nice. Overpowered for the gang, definitely - which happens most of the time anyway when the double is a dark magic user. This one seems to have a workable plan. Looks like Carter is going to have to accept magic if the Goa'uld do. Anya has some explaining to do... I guess she's the only one who remembers in context what this wish granted and broken was, if not necessarily the AU details.

Good flashes. Having Willow see Tamises' true form following Oz's strike should help with the demonology breakdown.

Slight motive breakdown in the text recap though. The show's Willow waits until midway through the ritual to put her hands in the sand, which prevents most of the grains from falling on the amulet's image - the visions have turned uber-dark by then, so I'm fairly certain it's a (unconscious rejection / deliberate miscue) on her part albeit a rather stealthy/passive-aggressive one.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [20 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One: The Dopple Effect" from Gideon
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A magical/ alien tech Willow will be much more difficult to deal with than a plain old vampire would have been. I wonder how and who the scoobies will approach for help?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One: The Dopple Effect" from GundumM
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eeermm,.. interesting concept but the fic is just average
Review By [GundumM] • Date [6 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One: The Dopple Effect" from YademosEbyam
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A very good beginning. Could you please continue this? (Plot primta; the SGC has refined their seismic monitoring program for stargates to include the use of unknown transport rings.)
Review By [YademosEbyam] • Date [28 Jun 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One: The Dopple Effect" from VillageOrchid
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Oh. I wasn't really expecting a substitute event... but cool. I guess I thought it might be a second accidential summoning from your synopsis.
Good start. Looking forward to more.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One: The Dopple Effect" from CPTSkip
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This was an excellent start. I just hope you keep writing this story. I've enjoyed all of your other work and am glad to see you haven't lost your touch. Nice to see the little troll get zapped by the infested Willow. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One: The Dopple Effect" from BrendanM
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Nice work so far, Mr. James.

I'll keep an eye out for the next part.
Review By [BrendanM] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One: The Dopple Effect" from renelf
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This is an interesting twist on a well-loved episode. I look forward to seeing how you develop the character of Tamises as well as how you bring in SG-1. I don't know if you do fanart but a pic to go with this story would be great.
Review By [renelf] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One: The Dopple Effect" from spikefan
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I absolutely love your story so far. I love your idea. Keep up the good work.
Review By [spikefan] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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