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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from leelaa
Review:
Terrific.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [1 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Rune
Review:
I'd add this to my recommendations if I was allowed more of them right now. I would add every story in this series but I can't do that. Series I like get the first story added if I can. SGC was dumb in destroying the thing but that's in character for humans. Maybe later someone can nuke the site from orbit and destroy more than just the controls and regulator for the field? I bet Dawn could shut the thing down. Jack should mention it sometime and you can write a chapter about it.
Review By [Rune] • Date [19 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Nice. Well written danger in the style of the show.

Daniel died yet again? Heh.

Nice touch with Jack trying so hard to rescue Daniel, even with his arm going numb.

I wonder what *did* happen to the civilization that made the device...
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [15 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Nice ending and I like how it introduces the Buffy cross,

Wispr
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Oh very well done, love how well your story flows and how your characters just come to life.

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
I like the science in this chapter, really makes it seem more like and SG-1 EP.

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Now that was a bloody cool chapter, you really captured the drama of it.

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Nice bit with how Jack was thinking when searching the dead body. Also that is so like Daniel to want to touch something!

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Love the amount of detail you put into this story and you do it in such a way that it doesn't bog down the reading any.

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
You really captured Jack's personality wonderfully. Looking forward to see where you go with this.

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from BillieBog
Review:
Great story, original and exciting. Thanks so much.
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [16 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from purrfus
Review:
I have read the other stories in the series but didn't see this one marked. I found it by searching for stories by you after finishing Key of Dagon.

This really tied into the other stories very nicely.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [16 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from (Recent Donor)kribby
Review:
Hey,

Can't believe this is on the underreviewed list. I really enjoyed this story.
Review By [(Recent Donor)kribby] • Date [7 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from (Recent Donor)kribby
Review:
Hey,

Can't believe this is on the underreviewed list. I really enjoyed this story.
Review By [(Recent Donor)kribby] • Date [7 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I loved the other two stories in this series, but having read this prequel, I had to re-read them and found them even more satisfying this second time around. Thanks for filling in the back-story!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [4 Jun 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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