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Review of chapter "Cool Castle" from ladyofthelake

Review:

you should have spike as the DADA teacher i really like hope you update soon

Comments from author:

Thanks thats a really cool idea! Sorry for not writing in a while,I figured with all the bad reviews that I 'd better quit. I now realize that I should keep going enjoy!

~AW~

Review By [ladyofthelake] • Date [11 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "The Letter" from VillageOrchid

Review:

A little rough, but gently charming. Please try to separate the paragraphs a little bit more so that when new person is speaking it is a new paragraph.

Comments from author:

Thanks dont worry it wont always be rough!

Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [12 Sep 04] • Rating [6 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Harry Potter And The Gorgeous Girl" from ripple

Review:

Your punctuation could use some work. Capitals are used with proper nouns and at the beginning of a new sentence, and you need to put a comma, full stop or something else like that at the end of dialogue, speechmarks aren't enough.

Review By [ripple] • Date [11 Sep 04] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Harry Potter And The Gorgeous Girl" from (Recent Donor)

DonSample

Review:

Paragraphs. Please investigate the concept.

Comments from author:

It's my first story. Thanks for the input.

Review By [ (Recent Donor)

DonSample] • Date [11 Sep 04] • Rating [1 out of 10]

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