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Harry Potter And The Gorgeous Girl

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Review of chapter "Cool Castle" from ladyofthelake
Review:
you should have spike as the DADA teacher i really like hope you update soon
Comments from author:
Thanks thats a really cool idea! Sorry for not writing in a while,I figured with all the bad reviews that I 'd better quit. I now realize that I should keep going enjoy!


~AW~
Review By [ladyofthelake] • Date [11 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Letter" from VillageOrchid
Review:
A little rough, but gently charming. Please try to separate the paragraphs a little bit more so that when new person is speaking it is a new paragraph.
Comments from author:
Thanks dont worry it wont always be rough!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [12 Sep 04] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Harry Potter And The Gorgeous Girl" from ripple
Review:
Your punctuation could use some work. Capitals are used with proper nouns and at the beginning of a new sentence, and you need to put a comma, full stop or something else like that at the end of dialogue, speechmarks aren't enough.
Review By [ripple] • Date [11 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry Potter And The Gorgeous Girl" from (Recent Donor)DonSample
Review:
Paragraphs. Please investigate the concept.
Comments from author:
It's my first story. Thanks for the input.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DonSample] • Date [11 Sep 04] • Rating [1 out of 10]
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