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Review of chapter "Hands" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Good companion to the story-- thought it was just right for the post-Malfoy incident. Love how you wrote these two :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [16 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hands" from (Past Donor)Deanie
Aw... Sirius is the perfect boyfriend. Not many teenage boys could be so restrained. Great story.
Review By [(Past Donor)Deanie] • Date [14 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hands" from frogstompinfun
Wow like Tear, I love it and it is the sweetest no need to continue or make an indepth story to explain everything or such it's perfect the way it is!!!

Comments from author:
Perfect? Oh wow *blushes* thanks! Hope you're reading the 'Key To Marauding' in Dawn-General, too? Hint hint, LOL
Review By [frogstompinfun] • Date [3 Oct 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hands" from sonofgloin
This scene was well written. In some places I was affraid that you would lose the undertones and the events that lead up to this, but you brought it back and saved it.

I would have had Dawn initiate the incounter more then Sirius but the fact that he was all asking of her made it work.

It could be a little sporadic in the changes between the hot and cold but you made it work in the way they connected with each other.

The actual "interaction" was written well and in contrast to some reviews I think it was just enough of the tingly goodness.

The one thing I want to say that I think brings it into perspective with all this happening after Malfoy, is that Dawn wasn't actually "Raped"... Technically she was but Malfoy never used his little Malfoy. I think if he did, the scence wouldn't have worked because Dawn would have been too ruined even to be touched.

I am looking forward to where you take it Anoron and hope I didn't seem too harsh in the appraisal.

§- sonofgloin
Comments from author:
Thanks for the honest appraisal, I really appreciate those! Glad you didn't think the tingly goodness was too much, too. Um, and as far as where I take it, I've decided there is going to be a fair amount of fallout from this little encounter, in light of the Malfoy affair... hopefully it will work and redeem me in some reviewers minds! LOL
Review By [sonofgloin] • Date [13 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hands" from SecondSilk
He'd do better to realise that hot showers would significantly lower his heart rate, and tire him effectively.
Well paced scene, and good characterisation of Dawn post-Incident.
Good KtM chapter, too. And I liked Lily and Andromeda's parts very much.
Comments from author:
LOL yeah hot showers would be better for that, but cold ones are just so much funnier to think about!
Glad you liked the scene, I've been worried about pushing the envelope just a little bit too far with it which is why I didn't include it in the main story. Thanks for the review!
Review By [SecondSilk] • Date [12 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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