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Review of chapter "The Dementors" from KatieKat
Review:
This is an awesome story and I would love to read more. please please update again.
Review By [KatieKat] • Date [6 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Dementors" from aveave
Review:
Great story. Are you ever going to continue writing it? I hope you will because I like it.
Review By [aveave] • Date [19 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Dementors" from spring
Review:
What is written so far is wonderful! I have to ask why oh why has this NOT been updated? I love this fic so far, please continue this wonderful fic soon.
Review By [spring] • Date [4 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Dementors" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Has this story been abondoned or what? UPDATE PLEASE!!!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [29 Nov 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Dementors" from zafaran
Review:
Any chance of getting more chapters anytime soon? You've got a very interesting start to this story, with a wealth of potential for the remainder of the story. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [16 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Dementors" from aussiemel
Review:
Love it. Please keep up the good work and update soon.
Review By [aussiemel] • Date [6 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Dementors" from Damia
Review:
Awesome story. I like Dawn's dad being Vernon's brother, they're both major assholes.
Poor Dawn, so much stress, not enough sleep. I wonder what will happen when people realize her magical abilities. Are you going to have her be a witch? I mean I know she could do magic in the show, but a lot of people decide to ignore it, so I was just curious. Write more soon.
- Damia -
Review By [Damia] • Date [10 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Dementors" from NoLifeKing
Review:
Very interesting story and idea! I wonder where this will go!
Do you still write on this? Hope you update soon! :-)
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [20 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Dementors" from Vaktoth
Review:
Excelent! Please update soon, I like this fic a lot
Review By [Vaktoth] • Date [27 Dec 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Dementors" from WiccaLover
Review:
Upadtate soon. Please? PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE?????????????????????
Review By [WiccaLover] • Date [14 Dec 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Dementors" from MissLesley
Review:
This is a very good story. I am enjoying it very much. I was wondering, where is Spike? I thin you alluded to him last chapter, with the smell of Leather, smokes and blood? Spike promised to look after Dawn and they were close so why is he not talking to her and helping her out. I am sure the dementor incident would have had him coming to her recuse.

Also based on their history, Dawn would have sort him out, as someone who understood her past and what she was, Dawn is usually not that passive, especially when it comes to Spike. As we saw season 5, he was the only grown up that did not lie to her.

Well to offer you a suggestion, you could alwatys use the counsel of wankers (oops watchers) to get Dawn to Hogwarts, after all they are based in england and would know about hogwarts.

Also can Draco actually be nice to Dawn, maybe he does it at first just to spite Harry, but I think Dawn and Spike would be the best person for Draco to hang with. Can you imagine the choas those three could cause. Besides there is no one more pureblooded than Dawn, and hell even spike's bloodlines are pureblooded. The three would get on like a house on fire.

I really hate the trio, so it would be cool to see that Dawn did not just jump right into their group and become a griffindork. I like that her and harry have not just hit it off, especially after he explained everything. I don't honestly know where Dawn would be sorted, but she is pureblooded and has always seen shades of Grey, even better than Buffy. So all that seeing things as black and white, good and evil would not suit her. I don't think Dawn would accepted just becuase someone was sorted into slytherin they were evil, and I think that she would get to know the person, not their house traits.

Thanks.,
Comments from author:
Lets see, Spike is coming, I promise. He's going to be delayed becasue I had chapter six all planned out but with Spike in it I can't make it work, so he'll be arriving a little later.

That point about pure blood will definitely come up either in this story or my other Dawn centric fic, Runaways, because I know, Dawn's blood is older and more full of magic than any of those pureblooded slytherins.

I dunno what to do with Draco here, I may make him evil just to contrast with Runaways.
All I can say is wait and see (and let me make my mind up)

Thanx for your review, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story however it turns out.
Review By [MissLesley] • Date [5 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Explaining" from katimarie
Review:
awsome, update soon. when is dawn ging to hogwarts?
Comments from author:
Soon, we'll have her in grimauld place by chapter six, and then it'll soon by off to Hogwarts.
Review By [katimarie] • Date [26 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Explaining" from malaskor
Review:
Interesting beginning. I'm looking forward to seeing what you have planned next. (Like will Dawn get an owl-letter?)

Keep it up and thanks for sharing
Review By [malaskor] • Date [26 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting the family" from lyapunov
Review:
I'm really enjoying this story and I hope you'll post more soon.

One pointer: you're mixing up your use of 'your' and 'you're'.

Otherwise, this is a great read, and I love the characterisations. More, pretty please!
Comments from author:
Sorry I'll try and sort that out.
Review By [lyapunov] • Date [18 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting the family" from Cutiepie
Review:
Yes, good update. I like how you have the Dursleys so completely obtuse, unable to see what is right in front of their faces, yet Harry picks it up immediately. It fits.

It will be interesting to see if they continue to treat Dawn as 'perfect' even when her differences come out, simply because she is related to Vernon. That would be kind of fun/funny/fitting. Kind of like: Harry is the son of the sister Petunia was always jealous of, so he must be bad/crazy, yet Dawn is the daughter of the brother Vernon always adored (I know, I'm just making that up spur of the moment, but you can use it if you want) and so must be wonderful, even though the two kids are very similar in all other ways. =]

I can't wait to see what happens next. =D
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [17 Sep 04] • Not Rated
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