Review of chapter "Teal'c, Champion?" from purrfus
Fun story with great teaser ending.
Review By [purrfus
] • Date [16 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Teal'c, Champion?" from Sulien
Great prologue! This would make a fantastic story, if you ever decided to flesh it out and continue it. :-)
I do have to say though, that even drunk Jack O'Neill ain't THAT bad...younger Daniel maybe, but not O'Neill. Yeah, yeah...so I'm a Jack fan! ;-D
Thanks foir sharing, I hope you take this further! :-D
Review By [Sulien
] • Date [26 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Teal'c, Champion?" from Keshkreature
Hehe, very funny fic. Wouldn't consider it sub-par at all. =)
Review By [Keshkreature
] • Date [21 Feb 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Teal'c, Champion?" from Duchess
I enjoyed this fic a lot. I'm also wondering why you feel this work is sub-par. So you didn't peg the SGC characters perfectly, that's okay in fanfic. *g*
Review By [Duchess
] • Date [7 Apr 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Teal'c, Champion?" from LadyCarpathian
Foreplay huh??? Still sniggering over that one..... I likes.
Review By [LadyCarpathian
] • Date [22 Nov 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Teal'c, Champion?" from Bugeyedmonster
Cute. I love Teal'c response to Faith's pickup line. But I don't really care for your characerization of O'Neill. I'm sorry but I don't see him as someone whom would act so irresponsibly. But the pairing of Faith and Teal'c is really cute. Oh, BTW, why don't you put this in the Faith-pairings part of the Stargate section? I think that it belongs there more than "other pairings."
Anyway, keep writing!
Review By [Bugeyedmonster
] • Date [16 Sep 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Teal'c, Champion?" from Zira
“You are a formidable warrior, Faith, and therefore your desire for a mating ritual is quite welcome. Perhaps we could exchange vital information in the event that a further meeting is desirable?”
Around him he heard the chuckles from his team as they realized what had happened. Daniel sat down with a grin.
“It must be a Jaf’fa thing to fight and then have sex.” - Class, sheer class. I love it, but I wish there had been more Daniel - you have to love the cute geeky ones. Loadsa love, Zira
Review By [Zira
] • Date [15 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Teal'c, Champion?" from Maria
It's not bad, that's for certain. Don't worry about the 'sub-par' thing; God knows that I had the same trouble.
I found the pairing refreshing and unique. However, as a quick sidenote, this was a *general* fanfiction. Therefore, there couldn't be any pairing that wasn't already featured in the shows.
Lastly, there is a point in the story where somebody says that "Teal'c can take can care of herself." While amusing, I'm fairly certain that you didn't mean to type this. If you did, could you tell us when Teal'c had a sex-change operation?
Thank you for finally finishing this. I really did like it...especially with both Slayers in there. The writing style was different, but easy to read. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Maria
] • Date [15 Sep 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]