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Review of chapter "Of Memories Best Forgotten and Revelations Best Remembered" from keeks
Review:
Ive been promising to review for ages so here it is.
I think that this is a really good story, even though I agree that it moves fast, ive read stories that have gone on the opposite end of the scale and i rather it go fast than slow!
It is especially good considering the fact that youve never watched Buffy (which is something we will have to sort out!) but if you need any help on Buffy based trivia just ask.
Comments from author:
Yay! Someone else likes my story!(even if you can't really say you hate it because I'd see you at school :P). It's always a surprise when I get a reviewer saying they like the story; never thought my story would be good enough to review. I was thinking of borrowing a box set of Buffy form someone, just so I have some idea other than what I've read in fics, which would be helpful :P
Review By [keeks] • Date [11 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Memories Best Forgotten and Revelations Best Remembered" from EllandrahSylver
Review:
I didn't say you don't write well, you just need to adjust your pacing a little. I really do like this story, though. Don't push your major plot points so hard, they can grow more effectively if you give a bit more room for them to work in your narrative.
Comments from author:
Ok, thanks for the tips :D
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [10 Jan 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Memories Best Forgotten and Revelations Best Remembered" from EllandrahSylver
Review:
Huh. That was interesting. Trying to confuse your characters into mental issues? Cause I'd be having issues if my life went ths weird, this quick. Entertaining story, though. Please continue.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I know this story moves quickly. I'm not very good at writing. But thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you like it.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [8 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Witchcraft, Education and Kittens" from Cutiepie
Review:
I think that you are doing quite well for your first fanfic story. Especially since you say you haven't even seen Buffy. First, a small problem I noticed. You talked about the late September sun shining down on Diagon Alley, but then Prof. Dumbledore says that he'll see Dawn in September. Or maybe I'm remembering wrong. But I'm pretty sure that's what I read. =]

As for Buffy's kitten's name, I can tell you the names of my cats. These have all been black cats, although I had others as well. First was Bridget, also known as The Black Bombshell (kind of a play on Jean Harlow's nickname). She knew just how beautiful she was. ;] Next was a set of twins named Tybolt and Portia. Most recently is another set of twins named Boo and Calpernia (Cali for short). You may recognise the sets of twins' names. The first two are from Shakespeare and the second two are from To Kill a Mockingbird. You may feel free to give any of my dear kitties' names to Buffy's new pet. I kind of lean towards having you name her kitty Boo, and give the kitten a habit of jumping out from behind/underneath things and attacking toes. =] That's something my Boo does.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [21 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Witchcraft, Education and Kittens" from Zira
Review:
I approve, much better quality of writing - and NO cliffhanger: YAY! It looks like this story's going places, and I can't wait to see what happens next. I've decided that I don't mind waiting to find out the big secret - it seems that it'll be well worth the wait. Aw - poor Giles got expelled, but, on the plus side, cute little kitten. Adorable! Question: As Dawn's the Key, and is supposed to only have been 'born' a couple of years prior to this story, then would Hogwarts, or presumably an American school, have been worked into everyone's memories, or did they not pick her up because a) she's only existed for a couple of years, or b) the Hellmouth masked her? I know you used the latter in the story, but my friends and I were musing - instead of doing school work, like we usually do. Loadsa love, Zira
Review By [Zira] • Date [18 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Mice, Goblins, Wands and Handsome Young Men" from Zira
Review:
Another cliffhanger! Meanie! Anyway, I like where you're taking this story, but I wish you'd tell how Buffy gave her blood for Dawn's wand - yeah, yeah, I know you don't want to spoil the story, but the suspense is killing me. ::sigh:: I guess I'll have to put up with it for a little while longer. Any story that I like, or like where I think it's going usually gets a great rating from me. Still, love it so far. Loadsa love, Zira
Review By [Zira] • Date [17 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Slayers, Keys, Demons…and Pillow Fights" from hattyretty
Review:
Grr evil cliffhanger person you!
like the fic but some of the do, don't, do, don't, do, don't, do, don't, do, don't, do, don't, do, don't, do, don't, is a bit repetitive.
luv ya
Review By [hattyretty] • Date [17 Sep 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Slayers, Keys, Demons…and Pillow Fights" from Zira
Review:
I'm liking this better the more I keep reading, so please write more. One thing, how and why did Buffy give her blood? Loadsa love, Zira
Review By [Zira] • Date [16 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Harry Potter and the Scooby Gang" from VillageOrchid
Review:
... and the role of Rupert Giles is being played by David Niven... otherwise... entertaining and pretty accurate for the Buffy-verse.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 Sep 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Slayers, Keys, Demons…and Pillow Fights" from ninjavanish
Review:
pretty good story so far continue writing
Review By [ninjavanish] • Date [16 Sep 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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