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Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from ShyBob
Review:
Nice piece, with a well-crafted dynamic between Xander and Faith. There's good continuity for the most part, but the last chapter feels a little off from the others. Mad props for having Clark put a smackdown on Robin.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from serenityselena
Review:
that went well...
and Robin got what he deserved too...
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from GrayCardinal
Review:
[snarf!]

Went spelunking after reading your newer Smallville crossover and have now run through the full "Coffee" series. This is, clearly, not the same continuity as the newer piece, but it's careful to be as consistent as it can with what we knew about the SV characters at the time, and those characterizations are very well rendered. I can definitely hear Kristin Kreuk's voice delivering the "I can bench press a cow!" line (mind you, I think actually bench-pressing a cow would be harder -- and messier -- than lifting a tractor, because the cow is highly unlikely to be cooperative about it).

I certainly wouldn't mind seeing more entries in this series. As far as prospective matchups go, some thoughts:

Hannah Montana
That's So Raven

CSI (Lindsey Willlows, Catherine's daughter, could be a Slayer-candidate)
NCIS (no obvious Slayer-candidates, unless maybe Abby, but much comic potential)

Extreme Makeover: Home Edition
(the daughter of a chosen family is a proto-Slayer our heroes arrive within an hour of Ty & Co. showing up to send them on vacation while their house is rebuilt, and chaos ensues)
Review By [GrayCardinal] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Past Donor)Joyful
Review:
LOL!!!!!!! I love this series!
Review By [(Past Donor)Joyful] • Date [27 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from PrincessTai
Review:
I like your Lana a whole lot better :-)
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [19 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from LastScorpion
Review:
What a fine story! I love the way you're doing the 'voices' of all the characters, especially Xander and Willow!
Review By [LastScorpion] • Date [6 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from LastScorpion
Review:
What a fine story! I love the way you're doing the 'voices' of all the characters, especially Xander and Willow!
Review By [LastScorpion] • Date [6 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from LastScorpion
Review:
What a fine story! I love the way you're doing the 'voices' of all the characters, especially Xander and Willow!
Review By [LastScorpion] • Date [6 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Past Donor)CallmemasterKent
Review:
I'm smitten with this fic and with this series! Bravo, write more...I'm a nut for smallville fics, and West-Wing is next up, c'mon I'm super happy...I could gush, and tell u each little bit that i liked, but I think i'll save that for my next review
Review By [(Past Donor)CallmemasterKent] • Date [19 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from SaraB
Review:
Nice. The only problem I can see is that driving 5 hours north of Wichita gets you...Nebraska. So that put a strange mental picture in my head. As a Wichitan, however, I did appreciate the mention. :-) And when I read “No, I just prefer tampons,” Buffy said as Xander sat." I laughed so loud several people in the next room looked at me funny....:-) (we have this glass wall-thing...) Anywho, good job. I'd be interested to see who in the White House ended up with Slayer powers. I could see it being Zoey...;-)
Review By [SaraB] • Date [16 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from GreydonCreed
Review:
Great story, looking forward to the next part that you hinted at. And boy what a hint... does the Secret Service meet mean that Jenna or Barbara Bush (whom are twins, could prove interesting) or Zoey Bartlett are now Slayers? :)
Review By [GreydonCreed] • Date [16 Sep 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Past Donor)houses
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Fantastic continuation of what we saw in the prequel. More Scoobie goodness, plus some Faith thrown in. you did an admirable job with her character, showing flaws and progress all the same, showing her heart and her still shaky understanding of human interactions. The treatment of Robin was entirely justified, and while I enjoyed him on the show, I can easily see him acting like this. But what I especially loved was Clark and Xander's conversation. You conveyed so much with so few words, a real understanding on Xander's part, and a good lesson for Clark to learn if he's willing. Cute interlude wth Lex and Willow- her babbling was adorable.

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Review By [(Past Donor)houses] • Date [16 Sep 04] • Not Rated
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