This has so much potential it was disappointing when it ended. The system shows the last update in 2004 so I guess its been abandoned or hopefully you just started posting elsewhere. I saw hopefully because even if I don't get to see how it ends I would like to think somebody did or might.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [11 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Poor Faith LOL, I haven't heard any mention of Jack's mother beforehand, but it would be great to see an embarrassed Faith try to answer her Grandma's questions. Could you do some more back-story on why Jack's Faith's dad.
Review By [anubiswillrule] • Date [11 May 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
I think this story is very promising. I like your portrayals of the characters' personalities and their interactions with each other. They're realistic and don't go overboard or get too melodramatic. I realize it's been a while since you've updated, but I would love it if you would pick this fic back up and continue it.
Review By [FicChick] • Date [30 Apr 06] • Not Rated