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Review of chapter "Tears" from Cassie
Good story hope you update soon
Review By [Cassie] • Date [9 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tears" from liit
hi just wondering if you ever going to update this story and when you do please let me know ( because i don't see a lot of paris/buffy pairing, it will be interesting to see if the the history change when buffy fights on troy's side and can't wait the look of achilles when he fights buffy. i hope that you continue because this story has potential to be really good. happy writing
Review By [liit] • Date [6 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Trojan Man" from oberon
Again I must point out that your Buffy is OOC. One, Buffy has no problems wearing address and she doesn't have a problem fighting in one either. Two, Buffy crying after telling a lie? I think not. These people are going to die, she knows that; and she knows that her future demands that these people die. Buffy is not some air head bimbo that would play with time on a whim. Buffy may allow her emotions to influence her decisions from time to time but she does know when the stacks are high enough that she must do whatever it takes to get the job done.

In other words: You're not writing Buffy, you're writing someone with the name Buffy. (Hmmm... maybe I should have that as my signiture)
Comments from author:
Ok 1st of all there has been episodes where Buffy has complained about fighting in a dress like when she's at the bank and at Anya and Xanders wedding she rips them Ok and sorry if that bothers you. 2nd Buffy wasnt crying because she was lying she felt bad for Helen and she missed her friends and family because they were back in sunnydale alone with Glory around and she doesnt think they can fight her on their own. And I agree, Buffy is not an air head bimbo.
Oh yes and try to keep i mind I'm not a professional writer or Joss Whedon so I cant exactly write a character he created as good as he and all the other people from Buffy might be able to.
Also this is only my 2nd fic ok I'm just learning how to do this sorry if it takes a little time for me to get it right. Thank you for your review even if it wasnt one of my best I still appreciate it.
Review By [oberon] • Date [28 Sep 04] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tears" from superbrutal
That ironic because in one story Paris escaped Troy but also got hurt.

He gets to Helen where she was taken and begs for help.

But she laughs when when he is killed in front of her.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [28 Sep 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The City of Troy" from (Moderator)FaithUnbreakable
I really like the idea, and you 're turning Paris into a whole lot better person than he is in the movie for example (not as coward-y). Only one thing. Cassandra says something about millions of people dying, which is a little too much, I think. I mean that's 2000something years ago, there were a lot less people around at this time then there are now. I'm looking forward to read more, though.
Review By [(Moderator)FaithUnbreakable] • Date [22 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The City of Troy" from Wingedslayer
That was a great chapter and I would like too see more soon.
Review By [Wingedslayer] • Date [22 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The City of Troy" from superbrutal
Weird, not long ago I had to read this book, and it was alright untill they killed Hector.

Maybe you could change that...
Comments from author:
I'll see what I can do about the whole Hector thing because that did suck,
it was sad. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [21 Sep 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Trojan Man" from cwolf
*scratches eyebrow* I like the story.... but the title reminds me of the theme song to a commercial about condoms.... it was titled "Trojan Man"
Comments from author:
lol! :-D
Yeah, that's one reason why I named it that, I thought it would be funny.
Thank you for reading my story, and for liking it, your opinion is very
much appreciated.
Review By [cwolf] • Date [17 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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