*pounds head repeatedly onto desk* Why, oh why did I start reading this when I knew it was unfinished and unupdated in the past three years? *sigh* I'm glad I did, though, because I very much enjoyed what I read! I really do hope that you finish this one day, because the story is definitely intriguing the hell out of me!
This is an excellent story and I hope you plan on continuing it. Your spelling and grammar errors are at a minimum and your writing is definitely above par. Will we see more in the future?
Review By [ueshiba] • Date [23 Feb 05] • Not Rated
OK, um . . . constructive comments, huh? Uh, I'm afraid not so much tonight. Not that the chapter was any less than the usual great, but just that I have a bit of a brain cramp and can't think of a single thing that I could say to help you make the story better. Just want to see more, that's all. =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [2 Oct 04] • Not Rated
That was a fantastic chapter. I especially liked that Illyria is now in an awful-sounding band. 'Course, I've heard that some 'rock stars' do act much like she does, and they don't even have the power to back it up like she does. =]
So, I'm still thoroughly enjoying your story, and hereby send feedback to keep the updates coming! Much fun is being had by all. =D
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [23 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Wow, this just gets better with each update. I have to wonder if Kober was a vampire, although I think not. Just some other sort of demon. Probably a moderately non-evil one too. Thank you so much for the update. I'll be waiting here, mostly patiently, for more. =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [18 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Uhhh, wow! Great, great chapter!! really wonderful... Good characterisations, good plot movement and just a wonderful feel to the whole thing. Truly enjoying this...
Sulien
