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Review of chapter "rain storm" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Nice story. Just would like to have some back history on Dawn's relationship with Buffy. And pleased that the author did have an ending to their story.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [3 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "rain storm" from DemonChildeKyra
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Wow! I completely LOVE this story!!!!! And I loved the happy ending! Jess/Dawn is such a cute pairing, I think they'd look really good together. Anyway, I loved it, great job!

~ Kyra
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "rain storm" from DarkRhapsody
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Heya!

Could there maybe be a sequel to this sometime in the future? I would very much like to read it if there was...
Review By [DarkRhapsody] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "rain storm" from Rory
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That story was great! I love how you had Dawn effect (sp?) Jess! I could just see it all in my head! Really, amaing story!:)
Review By [Rory] • Date [12 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "rain storm" from Sunfire
Review:
We rock? You rock! This story rocks. Loved it, thanks so much for the wonderful read.
Comments from author:
You guys rock. All of you. If it weren't for you, I would have stopped writing this story.
thank you very much!
Review By [Sunfire] • Date [31 Oct 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "rain storm" from Zakhynsia
Review:
awesome story. i loved it so much. i was hooked til the end. but you cant stop it now! please write a sequel or something....or just ignore me and concentrate on the praise for a story well done.
Comments from author:
I'll look into the whole swquel thing... gimme some time, we'll see what'll happen
Review By [Zakhynsia] • Date [31 Oct 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "rain storm" from CPTSkip
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Ahhhh! Your ending to your story was very sweet. I liked the whole story and really hope a plot bunny attacks you with an idea for a sequal sometime. Excellent job with characterization, plot, and dialog. Even if you don't write more to this story, I hope you do write more so we can enjoy it. Thank you very much for sharing this little gem with us.
Comments from author:
You are more than welcome
I'll keep writing if you keep revewing ;)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [31 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "gym" from Cutiepie
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Why is the next one the last chapter? Are you bored now? Hee, heee, heeeeee! Punny! I liked this chapter too. The Holy Grail reference was great. Living in Utah (Greatest Snow on Earth), I don't have quite that fascination with snow, but I do agree that it is beautiful when it is falling and just soon after. What sucks is when it has been lying around for a few days or weeks and becomes dirt-encrusted or blackened on the side of the road, or when it is melting and you have to walk through inches of slush. =]
Comments from author:
I've been to Utah, in the summer. Cool place :)
I actually saw "The last samurai" with some people, and I actually laughed and started saying "What is you quest... what is your favorite color" to my friends. I liked it.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [28 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "gym" from CPTSkip
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Nice update, but the fact that your story is almost over is sad. I hope more plot bunny eventually come and whisper in your ear because I have really enjoyed your story.
Comments from author:
Well, you'd be glad to know I'm already working on a few storied. Hopefully, something will come out of them ::)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [28 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "bid a basket" from Sunfire
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Not a cross I'd thought of, but you make it work so well, and the pairing? I just love it and ohh, this is just such a great story. Thanks so much for letting us read, it's really brightened my night here. Can't wait to read more!
Comments from author:
You are very, very welcome :)
Review By [Sunfire] • Date [27 Oct 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "bid a basket" from CPTSkip
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Delightful update. You have really caught the feel of Stars Hollow and all the wackos who live there. I like your Jess more than the one on TV. And I think your versions of Faith, Tara and Dawn are just wonderful. I know there are many views of Willow's 'true' sexuality, but I think Joss and company showed us a Faith who was omnisexual, just like your version. English may not be your first language, but you sure write it wonderfully. I hope you keep telling us more about these terrific characters. But if Jess goes back to Rory instead of staying with Dawn after Rory chose Dean over him, I will somehow kick his idiotic butt. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I always thought Faith was omnisexual, just thought I might share that theory with others ;)
You'll just have to wait and see about the pairing...(Mwahahahaha)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [26 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "partying" from CPTSkip
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I am still very impressed with your story. Your characterizations are spot-on and you write some clever dialog. I laughed many times as I read your story and usually have a smile on my face the rest of the time. OK, your spelling still sucks, but I can overlook that. Lol! Thank you for letting us read your very nifty story.
Comments from author:
Well thanks. I like hearing that I make people laugh. Makes me feel funny. But in a good way

I think I've said it before, English is so not my native language. My writting sucks, cause I am mostly self taught in the spelling of words. So, you'll have you forgive me :)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [22 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "painting" from Cutiepie
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I try to be good and review each update. Please don't scold me. =[

I liked this chapter a lot. Faith's comment about amazing the guys reminds me of when I was working as a bagger at a grocery store. There were 50 lb. bags of rock salt for sale, and I, being a tiny girl (5'6" but only 115 lbs soaking wet), would still pick them up and carry them to customer's cars. The guys eventually were starting rumors that I could carry one on each shoulder without any trouble. =] They thought it was funny that someone who looked so delicate could still lift something so heavy. Thanks for the trip down memory lane!
Comments from author:
I'll never scold again, Cross my heart, hope to die, stick a niddle in my eye.

Loved your little story there. Real nice :)
You think you're tiny? I'm a 5'1, and will forever stay that way! I'm not sure about weight and all, but in kilos, I'm 40... which isn;t much :)

keep reviewing. kay?
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [19 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "aftermath" from Cutiepie
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OK, so you always have me wanting to know something else. This time, it's why was Buffy being such a bitch? Is she so self-centered in your universe that she either didn't know or didn't care that she would be hurting her own sister, not to mention someone she had previously considered a friend (Tara)? I know she couldn't care less about hurting Faith. Or is that perhaps part of the reason she is wanting to take Dawn away? Because she knows it would be painful to Faith? Vengance!Buffy isn't very pretty. =]
Comments from author:
Once Dawn left Sunnydale with Tara, Buffy was pissed as hell. So, she blamed Tara for a bit. Or not a bit. She has a bit of a grudge (?) for Tara.
Buffy is just so damn sure she's right. It's so "my way or the high way" with her. Slmost everything is either black or white. So it's hard for her to have no one to blame. And Dawn was always good at taking shit from her sister. Sucking it up (Being showed a lot on season 6).
Also, i wanted Dawn to have a good reason for leaving Sunny-D. And a visit is always nice to write. So, walla, here we have it, the Buffy-Comes-To-Stars-Hollow-And-Brings-Up-Old-Mental-Scars deal.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [13 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "aftermath" from Saphrine
Review:
wonderful story and you characterizations of Stars Hollow residents has been spot on. good work!
Review By [Saphrine] • Date [13 Oct 04] • Not Rated
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