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Review of chapter "Pardoned" from Creamy
Odd and a little disjointed yet enjoyable.
Review By [Creamy] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pardoned" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
“Mother Superior, he’s fainted.”

Loved that line.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [2 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pardoned" from tonisimone
your summary SUCKS!!!!!!

other than that , great story
Review By [tonisimone] • Date [17 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pardoned" from Duskie
So I just read this. I know it's old and everyone improves with time. So, I hope in the intervening time, you've learnt to write at a slower pace. It needed more padding and substance.
It could have been good if you had developed a plot with reasoning behind it and had been about eight times more long winded.
Peoples emotions and feelings came out of nowhere and their logic behind most things was unexplained. the conceptual plot could have been used and enjoyed, 'How everyone lost themselves then found themselves,' we saw none of this though just the consequences.

The spelling and grammar were good for the most part. Although when making a point about education you confused public and privet schools.
Review By [Duskie] • Date [7 Feb 07] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pardoned" from Bill
Very well done!
Review By [Bill] • Date [21 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pardoned" from TealThanatos
There was a good part or two. Where he SAVED THE WORLD yesterday and so on, but there was _a lot_ of crap. IE: the sudden sex scenes for no good reason.
They really detracted from the story, I didn't even bother reading past where Buffy was suddenly in bed with rich guy.
Review By [TealThanatos] • Date [12 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pardoned" from feekh
You know I think my favourite part is Lex's absolute disbelief that he in fact helped save the world. That definetly had me laughing in my coffee.
Review By [feekh] • Date [10 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pardoned" from Bobboky
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pardoned" from Cutiepie
Well, the wrap-up seemed a touch rushed, but other than that, I enjoyed this story quite a bit. And way to change an entire mythos with Lex managing to stay on the slightly lighter side of things, and still being friends with Clark (much as I like that idea, after watching several seasons of Smallville). Craziness all around! Many things to think about, too. Thanks for writing! =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [24 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pardoned" from SeshatTeirm
This is insulting. There are many things I find wrong with this story, but the biggest is calling Buffy psychotic. She's depressed, obviously and with good reason, but to call her psychotic is an insult to people with serious mental problems.
Review By [SeshatTeirm] • Date [24 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pardoned" from JasonBarnett
Buffy is on anti-psychotics?! Look I love Xander. He has done many great things. He's saved the world and Buffy on many occasions. But this stuff you thought up is just out there. Examples.

I mean what was I thinking when I decided that I should force Spike to live with you only AFTER finding out he was in the middle of a killing spree controlled by the First?”- How about "Xander managed fine with Spike when he was fresh out of the Initiative."

I wouldn’t have lived past my SECOND DAY in Sunnydale if you had listened to me and Giles and stayed out of slaying and all I did was insult you.- If she hadn't known Xander she wouldn't have known Jesse and wouldn't have gone after him. He would've just been another unknown casualty, as happens when you've got one person against dozens.

When everyone welcomed Faith at first I acted like a spoiled brat and drove her away from us- Faith went bad after Buffy decided it would be o so cool to take up Faith's attitude on slaying. The pushing away was long over.

Dawn could have been an axe murderer for all I noticed- I assume this is based on her threatening to kill them if they hurt her. They knew Dawn by this point. And none of them ever distrusted her. THey were just more willing to do what needed to be done.

I insulted that poor SIT after my brilliantly inspirational leadership drove her to suicide- The First drove her to suicide. And it was Drill Sgt. Kennedy that insulted her earlier in the day. And I want you to imagine this. Say you're a WW2 soldier. Your unit is just about to be deployed. Then one of your unit commits suicide after listening to an "Axis Sally" or "Tokyo Rose" broadcast. Think of what that would do to the morale of your unit. Wouldn't the CO want to make sure that was seen as the cowards way out?

Willow's dwelling on getting away with murder. Considering Warren went to Rack and had a robot double to draw police attention if she hadn't Warren likely would have. If after everything Willow has done Willow goes to hell then there's no fairness in the world and the PTB need to be replaced.

Riley didn't really have any cybernetic enhancements. There was a chip that could control him, but it didn't normally affect him. In fact I'd call it the exact opposite of an enhancement.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [24 Sep 04] • Not Rated
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